Dimensional Rift Resort

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Simon_Silver, Jul 20, 2015.

  1. Simon_Silver

    Simon_Silver Guest

    I have some ideas about the story, lots and lots actually,

    Firstly, right off the first, page, I think it is called? Anyway, right off that page I have an idea: Watch TV! Let's see how interesting the authors can get with inter-dimensional PPV...

    Second I thought of a branch for the phone, room service! What if our intrepid hero was just about to eat dinner after he got done with his e-Mail? He's hungry poor thing! Let's see what kinds of adventure he can get into with inter-dimensional cuisine...

    And of course I am hopeful to see where this thing with the maid goes, there could be some intriguing options there, more than just a quick boink! What if you form a good relationship and she becomes a GF to our hero? Perhaps one end to the adventure could be her quitting her job to come home with you: or you refusing to go home unless you can come back to live with her!

    This seems like a promising beginning, I would love to see where it goes!

    ~ S.S.
     
  2. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

  3. catfish27

    catfish27 Really Experienced

    Not sure if the owner's on the forum, but any chance of making this story public? Had an idea and wrote two chapters for it before I realized it was private.