I have some ideas about the story, lots and lots actually, Firstly, right off the first, page, I think it is called? Anyway, right off that page I have an idea: Watch TV! Let's see how interesting the authors can get with inter-dimensional PPV... Second I thought of a branch for the phone, room service! What if our intrepid hero was just about to eat dinner after he got done with his e-Mail? He's hungry poor thing! Let's see what kinds of adventure he can get into with inter-dimensional cuisine... And of course I am hopeful to see where this thing with the maid goes, there could be some intriguing options there, more than just a quick boink! What if you form a good relationship and she becomes a GF to our hero? Perhaps one end to the adventure could be her quitting her job to come home with you: or you refusing to go home unless you can come back to live with her! This seems like a promising beginning, I would love to see where it goes! ~ S.S.
Not sure if the owner's on the forum, but any chance of making this story public? Had an idea and wrote two chapters for it before I realized it was private.