Vampire Newborn

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by krm2116, Jul 28, 2019.

  1. krm2116

    krm2116 Virgin

    Interested to see if there are any plot lines that folks would want to see extended or added in my story. I realize the story is definitely not for everyone.

    Thanks!
     
    krm2116, Jul 28, 2019
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  2. SilverSpectre006

    SilverSpectre006 Experienced

    I'm curious, will it just be vampires in your story or will there be other creatures as well? :^)
     
    SilverSpectre006, Jul 30, 2019
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  3. krm2116

    krm2116 Virgin

    Just vampires.
     
    krm2116, Jul 30, 2019
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  4. chris_brown

    chris_brown Really Experienced

    What would you say to some more unique unexpected locations for some turning scenes to occur in?
     
    chris_brown, Jul 31, 2019
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  5. krm2116

    krm2116 Virgin

    Chris, just added a branch based on a suggestion that you made.
     
    krm2116, Aug 13, 2019
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  6. chris_brown

    chris_brown Really Experienced

    what chapter starts it?
     
    chris_brown, Aug 13, 2019
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  7. krm2116

    krm2116 Virgin

    krm2116, Aug 13, 2019
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