New story cirque de fetish

I have yet to publish it yet but I have it as a draft. I am a little nervous about this one. If anybody would be so kind I’ll make you an owner so that you can read and critique before I publish. It would be greatly appreciated.

 

I'd happily have a look at it. What's it about?

 

A very broad story of wandering around a circus choosing a thread of fetishes.

 

I am nowhere near done but I just want to make sure that the story idea works before I publish and that people would actually enjoy the flow of it.

 

I don’t quite know how this all works but here is the link https://chyoa.com/story/Cirque-de-fetish.25544

 

PRobably the story is still in review