Kotonaru sekai kihan - Norms of a Different World

Discussion in 'Authors' Hangout' started by Zozzon, Jan 20, 2020.

  1. Zozzon

    Zozzon Virgin

    https://chyoa.com/story/Kotonaru-sekai-kihan.24926

    "A story where you have died from some unknown cause and earlier than expected. Because of this, you’ve been given the opportunity to live out the rest of the years you had left in another world. Not only that, but you have a choice of what kind of world it will be and what kind of social norms exist in it. The catch though is that with what norms you add, taboos and karma come with it. So… What world do you want to live in?"

    The idea is based off of Isekai anime and manga, in that the main character is transported to another world. Since Isekai has been trending for a while, I thought having one where the reader could choose where they would want to go would be something. This was also influenced by other stories that changes the world for one reason or another.

    This is also an experiment since a good majority of stories, at least the ones I've read, typically remove any taboos or negative norms from their stories to fit the narrative. Which there is nothing wrong with that and to each their own, but my opinion about a good story is that it needs to have conflict in order to keep it afloat. That's why, in this story, the worlds are suppose to have alternate taboos with their norms in order to add conflict, establish new rules and provide readers and writers with different avenues to explore.

    And while I am enjoying creating some of these scenarios, it would be helpful if others could throw their own ideas into the ring, be it a new world or a character exploring a world. My ideas can only go so far, and trying to piece together a coherent story, especially with using just field variables, is really making things difficult to keep it going.

    So, if anyone wishes to, the story is open for anyone to add their own ideas, characters, worlds or paths if you so choose. Or, if you're not a writer, feel free to share an idea here.

    Thank you.
     
  2. gene.sis

    gene.sis CHYOA Guru

    In most futa stuff I've seen, the futas basically treat men as third-class fuck toys. So that doesn't seem to be anything different than other stories.

    If futas are a dominant (non-human) race who force the human to work for them, interracial relationships could be proscribed. Now if your character is totally into futas, you have a lot room for tension and drama. (And forbidden sex)


    Not being allowed to wear underwear in a world where everyone is bottomless seems not to be bad as well. Sure, the main character might feel odd at first but I guess that it would change quite quickly.

    Now if you would live in a world where everyone is bottomless a real catch might be that you get in real trouble if you get a boner "for no reason." So it might be fine to have sex in public if you have introduced yourself to the other person and kissed them. But if you watch a girl who lies in the sun with their legs wide open or watching couples fucking in the streets might get you in real danger.


    If you go for a freeuse world, the catch could be that girls are quite fertile and so you are not allowed to cum on them or in them unless they are pregnant. If you cum on or in a non-pregnant girl, you have to clean her with your tongue. If you impregnate her, you have to marry her. (And as your newlywed will be pregnant, she will get creampied by any guy who spots her.)
     
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  3. Zozzon

    Zozzon Virgin

    Those are solid suggestions and I might add some of them later.

    The few I’ve already established are just one off examples, most of them I couldn’t figure out a good taboo for them.

    Maybe what I can do is set up the worlds, then make the choosable taboos. Again, this was made as something of an open prompt for anyone to take a stab at, but thank you for the suggestions.