Slut World

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by 2p1k3, Oct 16, 2014.

  1. dearnise

    dearnise Experienced

    That sounds like a good idea, especially if your male character has "Group Sex" & "Multiple Orgasm" perks, where alot of xp can be racked up, if the rolls allow, and you're writing it up accordingly. Of course, that is up to the moderator to decide if those attribute boosts can be taken more than once, up to the +3 limit, or just once.
     
  2. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    Thanks, Zingiber, for catching the name thing in my latest thread. I had originally named the two sisters Carol and Janet, but when you posted the parallel thread, I adopted the names from it. I use a Wiki for writing, and I never changed the names in the title or in the question. Thanks again, all fixed.
     
  3. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    So we discussed Apocalypse World and Monsterhearts. My gaming group finished a game of AP last spring, and now we're playing Monsterhearts. My character in AP was an androgynous 18 year old Brainer, whom I didn't assign a gender to until they were in a sex scene where someone would find out. The PC didn't correct people when they assumed gender. Had great fun with that character. Turned out to be a bisexual girl. Pretty scary, actually.

    In Monsterhearts, I'm playing a Witch from New Orleans. She just had sex with one of the other characters, and then she found out he's not a nice guy. So, she's going to use her token on him to hex him and stop him from doing what he's planning. It took me awhile to get into MH, but now I'm fully engaged.
     
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  4. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    The same problem mentioned previously for "cum on her face" and "fuck her" occurs with "she sucks your cock". If you get a 10+, you have to not cum. I plan to add "+1 forward". Does someone have a better idea?

    Edit: It's worse than I thought. There's already a +1 forward option.
     
  5. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    Just to clarify.

    If a PC with OMG! exposes his cock to two women, can he treat them as if he made them both beg, ala Group Sex?
     
  6. dearnise

    dearnise Experienced

    I think Swampthing would consider it as getting both women to go and suck your male PC's dick, and roll for the 2 women, with the necessary modifiers based on whether or not he has the "Group Sex" perk.
     
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  7. SwampThing

    SwampThing Experienced

    So cool to see that you guys are continuing with the game! At this point you should please feel free to modify rules as you see fit.
    That said, here's my own take on a couple of recent questions:
    • If a PC with OMG! exposes his cock to two women, they both suck his cock as though he made them both beg. Roll +control when they suck your cock, at -1 for 2 women (unless you have the Group Sex move).
    • You can spend XP on +1 to a stat. In keeping with AW rules, you can only buy this +1 to each stat once (although you can stack this unnamed +1 bonus with the named +1 stat bonus moves). You can never raise any stat above +3, and can never add more than +5 to a single roll.
    • There are clearly not enough options for the basic moves, if "she likes it" is assumed. My fix is to add a new "nothing bad happens" option to these basic moves.
    When you fuck her, roll+hard. On a 10+, choose 3. On a 7-9, choose 2.
    / You fuck her in the ass. / She cums. / You don't cum. / You're hard again already (choose only if you cum). / You make her like it (choose only if you forced her). / Take +1 forward / She doesn't scream, pass out, or get you in trouble.​

    When she sucks your cock, roll+control. On a 10+, choose 3. On a 7-9, choose 2.
    / She worships your cock. / You don't cum. / Take +1 forward. / You make her like it (choose only if you forced her). / You don't make too much noise, she doesn't pass out, you don't get in trouble.​

    When you cum on her face, roll+control. On a 10+, choose 3. On a 7-9, choose 2.
    / She swallows your cum. / There's enough for everybody. / You're hard again already (choose only if you cum) . / You make her like it (choose only if you forced her). / Take +1 forward / She doesn't scream, pass out, or get you in trouble.​

    When she screams, you are in trouble. Roll +cool to get out of it.

    When she passes out, she can't do anything else until time passes (or you force her ...). Depending on where you are, you could also be in trouble.​

    I hope that helps!​
     
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  8. dearnise

    dearnise Experienced

    I think it should be noted on the Character Moves page that the "Charming", "Cool as Fuck", "Fucking Huge", & "Iron Will" perks can only be bought once. Personally, I think this is fair, or it would be too easy for a well-experienced PC, whenever he/she is having sex.

    The "Nothing Bad Happens" option sounds like a good extra option, although I believe that should only come into play if the female NPC is being forced, or she's being taken in a way that isn't appropriate for the story scene on hand.
    Example:
    • If the male PC is having sex in a public place, and she moans or cries out too loud, then I would likely play it as getting both characters in trouble.
    • If the male PC is in a private place, and he takes her in a way that makes her screams, then I would exercise a storyline option that gets them in trouble, because they're disturbing the neighbors'/fellow hotel tenants' peace. That could be something to consider as I continue to work on my own SW stories.
    I may also exercise an option, where the female NPC passes out, or begs for your PC to stop, after she cums multiple times--about 5-10 times, as it would seem realistic.

    Another option for the Lap Dance perk could be "She strips you naked", and I would probably set it as an option, only if you're in a private place. The "Nothing Bad Happens" option could also be used, if you want to play out certain aspects of a lap dance, inside a strip club, or some other public place. So I would probably modify the perk this way:

    When she gives you a lap dance, roll +Control. On a 10+, choose 3. On a 7-9, choose 2.
    / She strips for you. / She grinds herself all over you. / She loves it. / She strips you naked. (Only if you're in a private place) / Nothing bad happens: She doesn't scream, or get you in trouble. (Only if you're trying to touch her or have sex with her, without prior consent.)
    I think Whip It Out could use a slight modification. I don't know if the 7-9 option of a female NPC not noticing your male PC stroking your own dick in front of her/watching her seems viable. I think it fits better as a "miss" roll. I think it could go this way.
    When you stroke your own cock in front of her, or while you are watching her, roll+control. On a 10+, choose one:
    / She sucks your cock. (Only if she is watching you.)
    / She touches herself.
    / She strips, showers, changes outfits, or dances.
    / She kisses, touches, or licks, or fucks another girl. (Only if rolling for both women)​
    On a 7-9, choose one:
    / She watches you, fascinated & turned on.
    / She doesn't notice you, but another girl does notice you, and she is either fascinated & turned on herself, or informs the girl you're watching/that is in front of you.​
    On a miss, choose one:
    / She doesn't notice you at all. (And can roll for another girl.)
    / You get in trouble, because she or another girl finds it inappropriate, and has called security, or the cops.
    Finally, some new ideas for miss rolls, since we're talking about a PC getting in trouble:
    / You're escorted out of the premises, and must go somewhere else.
    / You're arrested. (Time passes while you're imprisoned, and you must then go somewhere else. You cannot engage in any sexual activity until you're in an appropriate situation to go for the next girl.)
    / You get beat up/knocked out, and taken somewhere else.​
     
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  9. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    I've certainly used the "You get beat up" result with Joe, though it was more "She knocks you flat and stuns you, can you get out of trouble?"
     
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  10. dearnise

    dearnise Experienced

    I was reviewing the line of "miss" roll options, and I was thinking....Why isn't there an option for getting a PC beaten up or knocked out? Some ladies have significant others that can fight, and some ladies today can defend themselves properly.
     
  11. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    I just wrote a thread where the MC tried to avoid trouble and failed, when a jealous boyfriend showed up. I took the "Pass out" miss move to mean that the MC passed out from getting hit or stunned, instead of the girl passing out.
     
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  12. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

  13. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    I changed Josh's Character Move from Mastery to Multiple Orgasms. I wanted to try the mechanic out as well. Just making sure the writers know.
     
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  14. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    So, far I'm liking the Desire rules. You can stack some big bonuses pretty quickly. I've hit the point in one thread (not quite posted yet) where the total bonus is +4: +1 from Hot, +2 from Desire, and +1 forward.
     
  15. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    The Apocalypse World rules (SwampThing's inspiration for the mechanics) discuss special effects for "Advanced Basic Moves" when a roll is made on a 12+.

    I'm not sure right off what to suggest for the special effects, but if you're swinging around +3s and +4s, you're going to hit 12+ more often.
     
  16. SwampThing

    SwampThing Experienced

    Yeah, in Apocalypse World you can choose "advance 2 of the basic moves" only after 5 advances. I'd like to add something like that for Slut World. Advancing moves opens up 12+ options. Here are my ideas, but I'm open to suggestions.

    When you stalk her, on a 12+, choose one: she's in the shower /masturbating / asleep / tied up / with another girl.

    When you make her beg, on a 12+ choose 3 things she begs you for. You can choose things that aren't on the list.

    When you tell her what to do, on a 12+ it's her idea, take +1 forward.

    When you force her, on a 12+ she loves it, take +1 forward.

    When you fuck her, on a 12+ choose 4, and add to the list "she's hella tight".

    When she sucks your cock, on a 12+ choose 4, and add to the list "it's the best you've ever had".

    When you cum on her face, on a 12+ choose 4, and add to the list "she's covered in your cum".

    When you get out of trouble, on a 12+ look awesome doing it.

    As you can see, they mostly add color, not mechanical advantage, and all the "choose 4" options means you're back at the problem of there not being enough options for those moves to begin with. I hope using the Desire moves would help with that, as you could include "she gains +1 Desire" in your list of choices.

    I'm glad the Desire rules are fun. Another thing I like about them is that it should be possible to build xp without sex scenes, by using the romance her, and seduce her moves for more of a slow build.
     
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  17. Zingiber

    Zingiber Really Really Experienced

    I might add "and take +1 Forward, or give someone in the scene +1/-1 Desire" to the get out of trouble advanced move. (-1 Desire could make her go to -3 and flounce out, hopefully forestalling future trouble).
     
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  18. dearnise

    dearnise Experienced

    I wonder what you guys think of this idea I have for the "Alex Leon" story:

    As time wears on, and Shannon sees all the photos that Alex has taken of the various cosplayers, models, and other women, plus hears of his intimate tales with some of them, she undergoes a process where she tries to be a model or cosplayer, in her own way, while still being his secretary. Maybe she takes up a diet & fitness program, to help her tone up more. Maybe she learns how to make her own costumes for cosplaying. Or maybe she does all of that, and get a breast augmentation, going from having 34dd's, to 36 or 38ee's.

    The long-term story idea I have for this one, is similar to what I have in mind for the "Eric Antonelle" story, where one "possible endgame" occurs, where either a woman legitimately falls in love with him, or he chooses one to be his lover. In this particular case, I'm considering one storyline option to be where Alex realizes that while he knows all of those wonderful women to take photos of, or bed with, he finds true love...virtually right under his nose, in the form of Shannon.
     
  19. Torg

    Torg Really Experienced

    So, if the MC _makes her beg_, if she wants you to fuck another girl, does that mean you can do it without telling or forcing the other girl?
     
  20. SwampThing

    SwampThing Experienced