Shota Universe

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by HaremStarter, Mar 15, 2020.

  1. HaremStarter

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    Shota Universe is a Y the Last Man meets Low Sci-Fi harem anime. Any comments, critiques, are hopes for future chapters would be appreciated.
     
  2. Thorn_

    Thorn_ CHYOA Guru

    I thought shota/loli was banned on the site?
     
  3. HaremStarter

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    If you read the story you will see It does not violate any of the rules of the site.
     
  4. MidbossMan

    MidbossMan Really Really Experienced

    The setup is tricky... but I have to admit I'm very into it! No spoilers but I think it does a pretty good job getting around the age problem.

    I admire how much you're able to pull off without "giving it all away" so to speak. I like the pacing a lot. :D

    If I am allowed to make pitches... I would not mind an alternate timeline where your childhood friend's mom had stayed, ha ha...
     
  5. HaremStarter

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    Glad you are enjoying it. There is still one member of the Shota Harem to introduce. The actual childhood friend. I believe the woman you are talking about is the mother of his crazy weeb neighbor. I did not give a lot of thought to her other than as a plot device to move said Weeb into our boy’s apartment. But who knows maybe there is a bowl of Oyakodon in his future.
     
  6. HaremStarter

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    Bumping this as I've finally got to the point where every potential partner has been released.