PLEASE Need Help with certain scenarios! THANKS!

Discussion in 'Authors' Hangout' started by kenobi444, Oct 26, 2015.

  1. kenobi444

    kenobi444 Virgin

    Hello everyone.

    You do not know me, but I hope that there are kind people out there how can help me. That would be wonderful. That would be fantastic, absolutely fantastic.

    I Need help at certain scenarios. I have a... basic scenario. I already have a Beginning (Starting Story Point), I already have a basic fundamental structure. But I need help a creating certain scenarios. I need Ideas, but the best would be, if the Ideas are already more or less finished scenarios. finished scenarios not finished stories, that means you don't need to write the whole Story, but only the most important details of it, you only need to write the Synopsis.

    Like this: 1. xxxx. 2.xxxx. or - xxxx. - xxxxx. or A. xxxx B. xxxx C. xxxx and so on.

    Not like: He said "I love you" then she relied "I know" and after...

    I only need certain Scenarios. So I hope that you out there could help me with it. I would be very, very glade full. And beforehand I say thousand Time Thank you. Thank you. Thank you very very much.

    And before we begin, you might ask: What happens with the Scenario. What about the Copyright? Well, there is no copyright. I do not claim it or whatever! That means you can use the Scenarios you created in your answerer / reply for your own Story (if you maybe made one later) OR maybe I will use it too for my story. Who knows? And since they are not whole already finished written Story but only scenarios, everybody can use it. I really hope that there are kind people out there how can help me. That would be fantastic, absolutely fantastic. But because I don't want to bother you any more so lets get started.

    The Basic Idea, the Beginning is this:

    Jennifer, a 40 year old woman lives together with a 18 year old Boy called Corey and a 20 Year old Woman
    named Eleanor. They all share a House together. They live in the USA.

    All People are straight and Jenny has no relationship with Corey or Eleanor. What I need now are certain Scenarios. I already have written some Scenarios as Example. Some are already finished and some are not. You can invent / create whole new Storylines / Scenarios or you can help me finishing my begun but unfinished one I publish here:

    Corey Girlfriend left him, so he is sad. Jennifer has to cheer him up. She felts uncomfortable speaking with him about Sex and all that Stuff. But Jennifer is considered Corey's best platonic best friend. And she is a good Person so she tries to help him and speak with him.

    Next, Corey is trying to go to new Dates. But all Date never went positive. So he ask Jenny about is faults. But again, she help him but she feels uncomfortable. If Corey only would have a male friend he can speak with. On the other Hand Corey want to speak with her, because she is a Woman, and he need a Woman to talk to and not a man.

    This Scenario is unfinished: Corey and Jenny take a ride with the car. But somewhere, maybe in the Woods the Car Stops. Is the fuel empty or the Car defective? And there Cellphone is either, defective or there Batteries are empty. Anyway, not only that but they are somehow trapped inside the Car. And its winter and could out there. So they have to hug / embrace themselves to keep them war. They have to sleep in the spoon position to not freeze to death. But can a car door, freeze / ice up? And who rescue her? How get they rescue?

    Another this Time Finished Scenarios is this: Jenny is visiting her Sister in another state. Corey comes with her. They sleep in a Hotel since her Sisters Home isn't big enough. But a mistake is made by the Hotel. They only reserved one Room. But they need two. But all rooms are already taken. And they (the Hotel) didn't even have a Sofa or a folding bed. Not good for Jenny and Corey, at lest the Hotel apologize and let them sleep here for free. But they have to share a Bed together.

    Another unfinished Scenario is this: The two are once again with the Car, but the Car Stops again. Maybe the fuel is empty again or the Car is defective. Or first time the Car is defective and this time it's the fuel. Or the other way round. On the first time the fuel empty was and this Time the Car is defective. Or whatever. They are near a Barn so they sleep in the Barn. The Cellphones are once defective or empty or whatever. Or they didn't get a Signal out here in the nowhere. They wonder where the House might me. There is a Barn but no House near it, that's odd. But anyway, they sleep together in the barn on the hey. But this Scenarios is unfinished: Why is there a barn and no house, why is the Car "broken" again? What about there Mobile phones? Who rescue them? And, and, and...

    And another Scenario is this, the three, Jenny, Corey and Eleanor maybe go to the Beach, but the Waves are so big. Jenny is caught by a big wave, and this wave cause her bra to shift, to slip out of position. So Corey see Jenny nude. And the big wave also cause her to fall over him. So Corey lies on the back on the Sand, and Jenny is on him, her breasts on his chest.

    Another Scenarios is this: They all three are away from Home visiting a University Eleanor want to attend next year. This Scenario is unfinished: Maybe they book 2 Rooms, each with 1 Bed. But suddenly Eleanor's friend want to go with them. So they need one more Room. But unfortunately all the Rooms are vacated. And the other Hotels in the City are too far away or either to expensive. So they have to make it working. So Eleanor and her Friends sleeps together in the Same Room right? No, the End Result must be that Jenny and Corey shares a Bed. Maybe, eventually, they had booked 2 Rooms from the beginning. One Room with a Big Bed and one Room with a Small normal Bed. In the first place, it was intended that the two Woman share the big bed. The big King sized bed, that they made a Girls Party Night. But since suddenly spontaneously Eleanor's boyfriend want to join them, they had to made things different. Maybe Eleanor want to sleep together with her boyfriend, so they get the big bed, this means Jenny has to share her bed with Corey.
    Maybe this Version is even better, so they two hade to share this small, small bed . They had to hug themselves because there is not too much space left.

    I also need help at this unfinished scenarios: In Number 1 Corey has to see Jennifer naked for the First Time. Maybe its A. Maybe its B. Or maybe its something completely different: C.

    A. Eleanor and Jenny are inside the Bathroom. They are not lesbian. But they are woman. After Eleanor leaves the bathroom Jenny forgets to lock the Door. It's closed and not locked. So Corey strode in and catches Jenny nude, for the First Time. Or...

    B. Jenny and Corey are shopping. Yeah, not Eleanor and Jenny, because of whatever. Maybe Eleanor hasn't time for it. Anyway, Jenny is inside a locker dressing room and say something like: "Corey would you be a dear and hand me over the dress you hold in your Hand from underneath the Door" Corey hand her over the Dress but he opens the Door. "What the He--" Jenny cries out. "I said you should had it me under the door, because of a very good reason. I am completely naked". "Ups. Sorry for that"

    Or C. Something completely different.

    And the Next one I need help with is this: Corey and Jenny has to kiss on Near Years eve. Because it's tradition that they kiss on New Year. But how does it comes that they kiss each other? A losing Bet? Accident? Or on purpose? Because she wants to cheer him up?

    Some other Accidents are: maybe they drive with / use the Bus, and it's thigh. Every seats are taken. So they have to stand and be close to each other. Maybe the Bust sops abrupt, sudden, and Corey falls over and has to touch Jenny's ass to not get fallen. Or he touch her Breast, when he nearly falls.

    And I PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE I need more Scenarios. THANK YOU! They live in the Same House, under they same roof. Maybe he helps her at washing the dish or he help her at washing the clothes, and they touch each other. Unintentionally. There is Sex in the Air. "We" can fell the Sexual Tension. Its in the air. It crackles. There is Sexual Tension but it never comes to a Sexual Act. They never did it.

    So thank you for the help. THANK YOU! Thank you for your help, thank you vey, very much.

    Greetings: Kenobi444!
     
  2. Trugbild

    Trugbild Really Experienced

    From your basic idea, my first questions would be:
    - Why are they living together?
    - Where do they know each other from?

    This would be essential for their reactions
     
  3. kenobi444

    kenobi444 Virgin

    THANK YOU THAT YOU HAVE ANSWERED!!!!! THANK YOU VERY, VERY MUCH!

    Well as to answerer your Questions: As I have said before, they are Friends. I am quoting myself now: "But Jennifer is considered Corey's best platonic best friend. And she is a good Person so she....." So she knows a lot of him, because otherwise she only would be a acquaintance or a friend an not the best friend. Of course Corey also knows a lot of her because they are best friends, in both ways. It would be awkward and weird if Jenny knows much about him but Corey don' knows anything about her. That's not how friendship works. And Eleanor, she knows also much about them, because they live under the same room, but as I have WRITTEN BEFORE, Eleanor is visiting some University or College because she wants to attend it in near future. Maybe next Year. The next Thing I HAVE NOT WRITTEN, but we can assume this: Because most of them sleep on the Campus when they attend a College or University. So we can assume that she move away in some time from Home to Campus to study there and live there.

    I am not too sure about the first Question. Is this really needed for a "only" Scenario? Maybe. I please needed only Ideas, basic Ideas, but of course the Ideas should make sense in some way or be almost, more or less finished Ideas, but you do not have to write a whole Story. But they are living together maybe because they are a flat share, a living community. The thing is, that I need only Scenarios. If I later write the whole Story, if I later use the Scenario for a real, full length story, I could chance the "Reason". I could say... I could chance the reason... I could write that they have whatever,... live together in this House because they got it from a friend after the friend died. It was written in his will (testament) that these 3 should get the House. And who can say no to a free House. Or I could say that they are distant relations. Of course not Jenny and Corey, but maybe Eleanor and Jenny are somehow related. And Corey for whatever reasons lived by them. Of course the reason could be important. When Jenny and Corey talk about "the reason", or it comes up in other conversations. But the best thing would be that they are just a flat share. Just assume that they are. I can chance the reason later if necessary.

    But the Thing is: Either by Chance, by Fate, by Destiny, by the Universe, whatever Jenny and Corey are forced to talk about Sex, "dirty talk" maybe, and above all they have to spend time together. Like the Examples I have written before: Maybe per accident (or fate) they have to share together a Hotel bed. Or they have to sleep / spend the Night together in a Car, and its Winter so they have to hug each other an sleep in the Spoon Position. But some Scenarios are not finished and I even need some more Scenarios. By fluke, by coincidence they always have to spend time together in a bed or they get into erotic situations. Like they use the Bus but the Bus stops and so Corey grabs Jenny's Breasts or whatever. The erotic is there, but they never did it. They get into Situations where they have to touch each other. Unintentionally. There is Sex in the Air. "We" can fell the Sexual Tension. Its in the air. It crackles. There is Sexual Tension but it never comes to a Sexual Act. They never did it.

    So at this I need help, at creating more incidents, more possible scenarios. More possible situations!!!! THANK YOU BEFOREHAND!!!! THANK YOU!!!! Thank you, very, very much Trugbild. By the Way, Trugbild is Germany and means more or less, illusion picture. Ich frage mich nur ist das Zufall oder absicht (also gewollt)? (I ask myself is this coincident or is this on purpose [deliberately].)
     
    Last edited: Oct 28, 2015
  4. Trugbild

    Trugbild Really Experienced

    I speak german, so it's no coincidence, that my nick is also german ;)

    After viewing your chyoa-profile, I suppose, you are speaking german too. For that reason, it would be easier for me to tell you my thoughts in a private conversation.
     
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