I recently wrote and submitted a story here Someone else decided to make fun of it by submitting this I realize my story might not be everyone's cup of tea and it might be a bit over the top, but I think there's a more mature way of expressing one's dislike of it, either through a thumbs down or a comment. :/
Similarly I don't see an obvious connection between your story and the other one linked. Yours seems to have a strong premise and readable opening chapter. I wouldn't worry. -Z.
Alright, might've been reading into things too much. xD In my mind, it seemed to have a similar introduction/setting/premise and came out only a couple hours after mine by an account that looked brand new. I was thinking it was an intentionally poorly written parody attempt.
