Haha, no problem. There aren't many incest stories that actual focus on the taboo aspect of it, beyond simply using it as fetish fuel. It was a terrific read.
The link doesn't seem to work. I did go and read it though. Not gonna lie. I'm not a fan of incest, but this sounds interesting also jesus Rina is somehow so much worse than I expected.
Whoops, I linked the edit page, fixed it now. Yeah, as mentioned "Idol Sister" does give the subject the weight it deserves. It's not just incest for incest's sake. It's a bit camouflaged by how over the top Rina always acts, but yes she very much abuses Ben. That said the versions of "Ben and "Rina" here are slightly out of character with their "Hard candy" counterpart because...its complicated.
Thank you Gambio, you've really inspired me! Normally I can't write on a weekday but here I am 1000 words into the next chapter ♡
So... I guess tower of Voices is up for review now. Since floor 1 has been completed That's gonna be a meta AF one... XD
Added it It might be slightly against the rules since none of the commentors consented to it, but neither Marcie or Gina ever gave much of a shit about rules
Marcie and Gina might have a slight bone to pick with this author https://chyoa.com/chapter/Dark-Lord,by-unkown7.929925
Well that was definitely the most scathing review I've seen from them so far. I did try to read Dark Lord in the past, but that was back when it was like 3 chapters deep or so and basically just went up to the dragon being born and killing everyone. Fun fact in the original furry story that Dustbin is based on Claw was a dragon and had a scaly dick. The decision to give him a pearled dick in dustbin was because I really liked him having a special dick and pearled was the closest I could think of to having actual scales. Sorry tangent... Can't say I was a fan of Dark Lord when I read it. Although again I read only a very small portion, but it definitely read like a comedy, but one that hadn't quite realized that a lot of comedy requires pacing. Everything moved super fast. I also just wrote it off as a cuntbusting story which was something I had no interest in and never really went back. Ironic despite my own works that simply hitting women in the vag isn't something that interests me... Feels like it should honestly...
A lot if it has to do with unknown7's history on Cursed Punishment, he added a lot of branches off from "hard candy" and if you read some of them you probably get why Marcie and Gina(and myself) are a bit displeased. As for Dark Lord, a comment sums it up pretty well "This story is a fucking meme and I adore it."
One day, the girls are going to actually read something both of them really like. That review will be awesome to read. That said, it surely hasn't happened yet
definitely a tall order, but I view the holy grail as getting them both to masturbate on the same story.
I know at least Gina will enjoy that there are plenty of lesbian interactions in Emily's run, assuming she goes down the right paths at least.
I recommend getting high before reading this one https://chyoa.com/chapter/I'm-in-a-story-,-by-blank97.933058
