Good morning to all of you, I've been posting stories on CHYOA for the last few months now and just discovered the forums. Like any other writer I always love to get feedback, whether it's good or bad and apparently this is the place. A few quick things about me: 1- I'm not an English native speaker so you might notice that sometimes I switch from British English to US English. Also sometimes my grammar is a bit lacky and I might, from time to time, use a word for another. Don't hold this against me but do tell me, I'm always trying to improve. Why do I write in english? It is simple. I want people to read me and English being the universal internet language... 2- As you might notice, I'm into vampires. That's enough about me. Now I'd love to get your feedback on either Secret Diary of a Vampire Teen (located here:https://chyoa.com/story/The-Secret-Diary-of-a-Vampire-Teen.7862) Or the next installement in the series, Secret Diary of a Vampire Teen : Freshman Vamp (located here:https://chyoa.com/chapter/Introduction.217706) Thanks a ton. BrainVamp
Nope ... not yet... Just been completly overwhelmed by work. I hope I'll be able to post a couple of chapters next week.
