Whilst the site was on a hiatus and I was thinking about a final thread for "Head Leaper", I got inspired and wrote an entire new story "Love Part Britain" in a couple of evenings. https://chyoa.com/story/love-party-britain/cover It starts of as third person which basically sets up a universe with the first 2 threads and I hope people might let there imagination run world. There's no magic but it is set in the future so technological factors come into place. Although I have not mentioned it, I hope there have been lots of medical breakthroughs particularly with STDs such as HIV because I always find it a pain to mention condoms. However after the initial couple of chapters, there is scope for stand alone threads on auditions, the story seems to be fairly linear as I spend several threads describing an entire TV series where I have been somewhat light on the sexual description. The reason I find this an issue is I wonder whether this site is the right place for the story. I have looked at Literotica and quite frankly the home page looks as though it belongs from the early 90s which puts me off. Are there other sites for erotica fiction, that people use? Also are the many female readers here or there, as it occurred to me that part of the subject matter of my second story might be more attractive to them. My final point is feedback. There does not seem to be a lot. Admittedly I have not given any myself, possibly as a new writer I do not really want to judge others, but it seems as though readers are not putting in much input. It would be good to know what people like or dislike about stories. "Head Leaper" got a bit extreme but then power corrupts and if you look at the sexual history of people with real power, Roman Emperors and Dictators (Hitler, Mao, Castro), their behaviour and sexual fetishes can get extreme ... and that was before porn o the internet!
Just some words about condoms. What's wrong in using condoms? So most people dislike the moment, when they have to put them on. That's annoying, if you are horny as hell and just want to get in. But damn it, maybe it is too risky without. Well, on the other side there are enough people, who don't use condoms, even with changing partners. Just imagine, why they are doing that or what they do to prevent the risks (or just to ease their conscience (e.g. HIV-tests for home use)). It could also be, that they don't think about in the heat of the moment (could be interesting while partner swapping, if only one pairing use a condom). The only thing, I recommend is to show the consequences and let the characters live with them. e.g. I'm currently planning, that one character should get a vaginal yeast infection after several switching from ass to pussy.
I guess because there is an element of sexual fantasy about it. Most of the women I have slept with have quite understandably insisted on it, but given the choice (i.e. no concern about pregnancy of STD) I wouldn't wear one. So yes in the real world they are very important but I remember but I like to imagine future when we can once again go unsheathed. In the real world many people do have sex without condoms and in some cases, but only a minority, do they suffer the consequences so although I take your point and it might be useful to mention the risk. I do remember the first story I wrote which was about a man with ultimate power who could fuck any woman he wanted who did contract actually contract HIV and died a painful AIDS relate death - that was back in the 80s when HIV knowledge was poor.
A future without STDs... I think, that won't happen Maybe it could be possible with heavy regulations like forced periodic STD-Tests, "red marks" for infected people (quite discriminatory), punishment for the concealment of STDs and things like that. Other way would be to separate some healthy people from the rest of the society (e.g. within a mars colony)
You're right it would be very difficult to eradicate STDs but I guess it's like any risk assessment. Like I said, many people, even though they are aware of/educated about the risks, nevertheless fuck without a condom, particularly your 18-25 year old Brits abroad (possibly the most hedonistic people on the planet). If the risk diminished, due to medical advance, and even the most serious diseases became manageable, then more and more people would take the risk. The growth in unauthorised street racing is no doubt due to cars being considerably safer for the occupants (although not the onlookers) than it was say 10 years ago. I've seen footage of these races and bad accidents are frequent and yet the driver almost always walks away.
Well I wrote this story as parody. I had no idea this puritan bollocks was coming: http://www.independent.co.uk/news/uk/a-long-list-of-sex-acts-just-got-banned-in-uk-porn-9897174.html
Quite enjoying the Middlemarch XXX sequence. I had no idea there was a Harry Potter TV series -- the US only got the movies.
No I made that up. The story is set in the future, either 2025 or 2030 and certainly by the latter I would imagine somebody had made the Harry Potter TV series, so all the actors are fictional but they would be big stars around the world. I couldn't really see Emma Watson playing Rosamond but Daniel Radcliffe has done nudity on the stage. I read an article yesterday which asked why people are always adding erotic scenes to Jane Austen novels. They said nobody would do the same to a work by the equally great George Elliot ... well I have
Clearly. Of course this is partly because Jane Austen is a lot more famous. And of course Wickham clearly runs off with Lydia for sex so one has to question if his relations with other women were similar whereas one cannot really question Dorothea or Celia's behaviour. Although just why were Will and Rosamond so close? Was it really just a friendship between 2 sexy people? In analyses of 'Middlemarch' there is a lot of talk of Dorothea's submissive nature to Casaubon - it might have been fun to explore that, but I only provided a fairly tame spanking which Dorothea did not agree to. However I could certainly go there with Austen's gothic parody "Northanger Abbey", where I could unparody it or run at as a series of Catherine's dreams being shackled and whipped etc., or into much dark Bronte territory "The Tenant of Wildfell Hall".
I have added pictures of who the actors I imagined were based on (looks-wise although there may occasionally be a similarity between careers) for the Pride and Prejudice and Middlemarch adaptations. It is not as easy to get the right pictures as I thought. I also largely avoided nude or topless pictures, although Tabitha being a porn-star has a see-through top.
