Hello everyone, I am the main author of Paying the Movers. The story has been out for a little over a week now so I thought I would post this to see what people thought of it and also what they would like to see in the Alternate and maybe even the Original timeline of the story. Shout out to 11kestrels and dark8264 for they're wonderful collaborations. Thanks in advance to any who post their suggests.
I can only speak for myself, but I'm enjoying the story so far. As for what I'd like to see: you're doing just fine so far, but that said, I have a soft spot for creampies and seeing a girl passed around a bit, ESPECIALLY when the girl likes it more than she's willing to admit to herself. Keep up the good work.
Thanks for the reply and words of encouragement. I'm partial to that fetish as well. I'll keep it under advisement for the Alternate ending threads.
So I've started a whole other path for Lara. this one is outside the scope of the original threads. I see it as being a dark path as really what's the point if it isn't. I would just be retreading old paths with a different setting. Anyway any feedback suggestions on this would be appreciated.
I'm trying to get back in the swing of writing again. I wondered if any of you fine people had any suggestions for "jobs" Lara might be placed on by her new found madam. I'm a bit stuck on what to do so any suggestion would be welcomed.
Would be good to put a link to story in your first posting, so readers who haven't stumbled over it can easily look it up.
I've loved the story right from the beginning and followed it religiously. Future jobs to consider,serving virgins at a nerd frat party,payment for dropping a police investigation into her business affairs,cake girl at a stag party and one of my personal favorite ones tour guide into the world of sex for both sexes! If these help you any use them with all credit to yourself!