Hello everyone, I'm trying to write this story for some days now and I'm really enjoying building it up and writing it for a public audience but, as someone in the comments made me notice, since English it's not my first language there are a lot of words used in the wrong way that could be fixed with a little proofreading. If someone wants to help me in my journey feel free to DM me or answer to this thread, I'm also open to any suggestions! Link to the story: https://chyoa.com/story/The-Artificial-Parasite.37102
If you edit your post to include a link to the story, that would be helpful for people trying to find it.