The Artificial Parasite

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Karatus, Jun 30, 2021.

  1. Karatus

    Karatus Virgin

    Hello everyone,

    I'm trying to write this story for some days now and I'm really enjoying building it up and writing it for a public audience but, as someone in the comments made me notice, since English it's not my first language there are a lot of words used in the wrong way that could be fixed with a little proofreading.

    If someone wants to help me in my journey feel free to DM me or answer to this thread, I'm also open to any suggestions!

    Link to the story: https://chyoa.com/story/The-Artificial-Parasite.37102
     
    Last edited: Jun 30, 2021
  2. Thorn_

    Thorn_ CHYOA Guru

    If you edit your post to include a link to the story, that would be helpful for people trying to find it.
     
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  3. Karatus

    Karatus Virgin

    Done, thanks