Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by Gambio, Jan 24, 2021.

  1. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

  2. Sarckle

    Sarckle Virgin

    Loved the review. If others want to review it through Masochist Mode, I'm all good with that. (I probably won't do any reviews with Holly though, just cause I don't have the best grasp on her character to do meta stuff)

    I would also be happy to submit my Pokeslut branch for Marcie and Gina's viewing pleasure, whenever they have a free moment or when your queue is in need of more filler.
     
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  3. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    Added and added.

    Yeah, no sweat on that. In general you want to have two characters bouncing off on each other. I'm not saying a solo character review is against the rules but it would be...challenging.
     
  4. Unknown7

    Unknown7 Really Experienced

  5. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    I have to admire your dedication to continuing that review.
     
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  6. Unknown7

    Unknown7 Really Experienced

    Just another four parts to go.
     
  7. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Note I am still continuing Alide and Dahlia's review of Dark Lord... I've just been struggling to motivate myself lately to write much of anything other than Tower.
     
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  8. Unknown7

    Unknown7 Really Experienced

    Speaking of reviews, I'm writing part 2 of Tower of Voices. So how many chapters do you have planned? I think there were supposed to be ten floors of this tower, right?
     
  9. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    There are in fact going to be ten floors. The story is currently stopped at floor 3, it updates every Monday and Thursday and I have no idea how many chapters it will be by the end.
     
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    Unknown7 Really Experienced

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  11. TheLeherengin

    TheLeherengin Really Really Experienced

    Ironic that he and Marcie apparently think the same on that one.
     
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  12. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

    A very disturbing coincidence
     
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  13. AlexandraS90

    AlexandraS90 Really Experienced

    My goal is to publish one, maybe even two new chapters before she reads and reviews the 230+ existing ones.
     
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  14. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru

  15. Hiddenblade

    Hiddenblade Virgin

    I would very much like to throw my story into the ring!
    https://chyoa.com/story/The-IRLRPG-System.35978
    It's mostly plot at the moment, but there are a couple of lewd scenes later on, and there'll probably be more by the time you get to it.
    Thanks! :)
     
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  16. Gambio

    Gambio CHYOA Guru


    Not a problem, added you.
     
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  17. Unknown7

    Unknown7 Really Experienced

    Ok, finally managed to push through part 4 of Hard Candy. I should have the review up soon.
     
  18. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

    I've been too busy playing catch-up with LLNO, but I hope to get Lois & Blaze back to do some more masochist mode reviews soonish.
     
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  20. Zeebop

    Zeebop CHYOA Guru

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