Well, moving on. I've been planning the past few days to have a big sequence where several hot/naughty scenes happen almost at once in the same place. Those who are caught up with my thread know that the characters are about to go on a hike to Zaffre Falls, that place with a small lake and a waterfall. My plan is to have a few short/medium-length scenes where naughty stuff happens, like two characters making out behind a tree, girl shows her tits to boy, some flirting, and maybe a truth or dare game. So, I wanted to ask you guys for suggestions or wishes about that kind of short scene you'd want to see in those chapters and which characters in it. I'm already thinking about some fun interactions on my own, but suggestions have a good chance of finding their way into the chapter as well. Thanks! To make it easier, the ones who will be at Zaffre Falls are those characters: Logan, Scarlett, Heather, Ashley, Brandon, Victoria, Sharon, Alice, Jake, Kurt, Duncan, Trent, Scott (new football player character), Russell (new football player character), Lisa, Amber, Tanya, Kevin, Troy, Paul (these last three are basketball players with Jake), Andrew, and Grace. Terry will stay behind at Ravers Cabin.
I'm just going to scatter-shot some ideas or things I'd like to see: Some hints at Jake's secret fetish. Kurt is annoyed at being used by Sharon in her scheme so tells her off when she tries to come on to him again. The classic characters stumble upon another couple in the midst of a blowjob, leading to the original girl jerking the guy off. Trent, Kevin or Kurt grumbles about the new guy/girl ratio, only to spy on two or even all four of the new athletes hooking up with each other. Heather orders Amber and Tanya to stay away from Kurt and encourages them to flirt with Logan because she thinks he would like the attention. Logan eventually finds out, raising tensions with Heather further. Jake and Brandon have to intervene to stop a fight breaking out between the football and basketball players. Sharon decides she wants to steal Andrew. Scarlett gets more jealous at Lisa and Logan hitting it off, causing her to try to escalate things with another guy (except Duncan, I feel like their existing friendship would prevent her from involving him in her pettiness) I'll probably post more if I think of it. Obviously I don't think it's yet time for full blown sex scenes yet
Thanks! A few of those are things I was already thinking about including, like Amber and Tanya flirting with Logan, the hints about Jake's fetish, Scarlett annoyed at Lisa, and some drama involving Heather, Andrew, Sharon, and Kurt. Good to know that I could project that the story was going that way, lol. When you said the athletes hooking up with each other, you mean a M/M scene? An idea that's growing in my mind is Victoria and Trent doing something behind a few trees. A follow up to their double date from the start of the summer. Duncan trying to hit off with a girl that he thinks could benefit him in the future is a possibility as well.
Jake's fetish was on the top of my list. (which reminds me to keep fleshing out that thread). Kurt trying something with one of the new girls could be fun and also maybe throw a wrench in Heathers plan, or not. The different teams could lead to some tension over a girl or some bonding with the girl lol I see Sharon and Tanya up for this. I was thinking maybe Victoria and Grace spying on a couple and maybe getting caught either by the couple of by someone else. Could also work for Scarlett, Logan, etc. I don't see Grace straying too far away from Victoria, Lisa or Alice but maybe she gets lost.... Duncan could try something with Heather only to run up against Andrew. maybe he makes a move on Grace? I do see some friction with Logan/Kurt. Maybe with one of the girls that Heather has lined up for him. Also agree with some of Porkswords ideas
Not so much a heavy M/M scene, moreso to even off the hetero male/female ratio. At this point, there are 12 guys (13 including Terry) and only 9 girls (10 when Grace is added). I can't image the 4 new characters are going to be taking over all of the sex scenes right away, so it just gives them something to do in regards to the greater plot rather than just acting as ornaments. Depending on who catches them/who was caught, it could also add to the plot. Maybe Duncan catches them, acts all chummy and says he doesn't care or he won't tell anybody, but the implication is now they owe him a favor etc. If you really want to go all in on puppet master Duncan, you can even have him work with Sharon to split up Andrew and Heather, so that he can swoop in and "save" her. Maybe he also tries to get with/show off in front of Vicky with the intention of getting favorable coverage in the school paper (This could also just be me trying to shoe-horn in a proper antagonist character, haha).
Going along these lines if there is some M/M action maybe Terry can go on the trip and he finds them and starts to question himself if the idea is for him to eventually be gay or something.
Yep, there 12 guys and 10 girls on the hike, but not everyone will participate in the sexual shenanigans, lol. There'll be two focuses of attention. Logan and what happens with Scarlett, Lisa, Amber, and Tanya. And Heather with the the whole Andrew, Kurt, and Sharon drama. But during the possible truth or dare scene, they might do stuff with others. During it all, we'll see shorter vignettes with the other characters. I like the idea of a M/M scene, even if light, but the character I have in mind for this isn't on the trip, which would be Gavin. I like the idea of a character catching another one watching other characters. Maybe I can use this with Trent and Victoria. I don't want Duncan to go full villain because I have other plans for him in the future, but he'll definitely be trying to get with the top girls. I need Terry at the cabin for a scene, that's why he won't be joining.
That could work, my only advice is focus on the current story for now, and don't go down a rabbit hole of planning too far ahead, otherwise that could distract and might not enjoy the current work (which I'm enjoying a lot btw). I'm all for thinking ahead and more threads in the future I'm here for, just make sure you enjoy the current works
I quite like the ideas Porksword put forward, and love the idea of Victoria/Trent getting a little steamy. I think definitely more development with Jane and his fetish, maybe the basketball team all fuck Tanya while the football team fuck Sharon? Maybe not fuck but mess around with.
Thanks! Yep, I'm only focusing on the current story right now. For the sequels, I only have the theme of each one in mind. For the record, the first book was called the "Victoria Book" for some time in my mind, but thinking clearly about it, it'll probably be more fitting to call it the "Scarlett Book". Jake's fetish will definitely be getting some page time in this. Strong scenes probably won't happen during this hike, but that won't mean we won't have some steamy moments, lol.
The scarlett book sounds good and makes sense. Wonder what will happen for Grace and Uncle Lance in the sequels More Jake and his fetish is gonna be hot, can't wait!
Assuming Grace and Lance end up fucking, the sequels don't present many opportunities for them, living in different towns and all, but a possibility I thought about is having the other women in the family, Pietra and Helena, joining the fray. Maybe the brother, Julian, gets in it too. Only the father stays oblivious, lol.
Just going to ask some random esoteric questions that are meaningless right now but relevant to the new story I'm writing. In the Madison/Lisa/Alice/Grace group, who is the leader? If not, who would be the most likely to take charge if they were presented a problem to solve as a group? Would Peter drive the fancy hire car, or would Hannah or Taylor? The car is not on any of their names. Would the model change things (i.e. 4x4 vs convertible)?
Grace certainly likes to think that she's the leader, but Madison and Lisa are the ones to take charge if a problem arises. Alice is more chill. That’s a good question. Hannah would prefer to be driven around if they were in a fancy car (or any other car if she can, lol). Taylor wouldn't care much either way, I think, so Peter probably would get driver duties. Regarding their own cars, the headcanon I use in my stories is that Hannah and Peter have their own cars in Green Hills while Taylor left hers behind for Paris.
Porksword, I can't even begin to imagine the number of possibilities that your new thread is bringing, lol. The amount of possible pairings and plots is immense. Great work on that! As I said in my comment, you mentioned Paris needing her own thread, and I thought that maybe you could add it in interludes during your resort thread. Unless you need characters that went to the resort in it.
It's moreso that the characterization of "headstrong LGBT character who gets herself into trouble because of her inexperienced bravado" (which is my read on the character, at least) is probably something that I think requires a thread to be built around. I theoretically could have added her to the thread, my original plan had her in it, but the story I'm imagining I would end up writing for her just doesn't fit this one. It's not something that would fit in a week. As for HWDU, there is definitely a lot of moving pieces. My planning for this one literally had multiple spreadsheets, haha.
Yeah, I get what you mean. That's kinda my goal with Paris in my thread as well. She's gonna show up later and have part of the story centered around her. Ah, when the multiple docs and spreadsheets are needed, that's when we know things will be fun, lol.
