I need someone to proofread a story of mine

So yeah, I need help from someone, who preferably has experience in writing. I'm sure that there are no grammatical mistakes or inaccuracies in the plot, but I need help with phrasing.

 

What type of phrasing do you need assistance with?

 

I want help reducing sentences to be smaller and more understandable

 

How big of a story are we talking here?

 

I have a synopsis ready and I've started writing the chapters. I've written about 5 chapters till now and with all the stuff I've already got in my brain, I could write 30 more chapters if I sit down and start

 

Would you be willing to pay to have your story proofread?

 

Sorry, I can't

 

Post the story here and I’ll give you advice on flow. It might not be professional level, but it’s better than nothing.