Noble's Court

Hi, I'm posting this thread to give my first story more publicity, Noble's Court.

I have 2 intentions for this thread:

1. If you find grammartical errors, spelling errors and/or inconsistencies, please inform me and I will correct them, thank you.
   
2. And if you have any ideas and/or suggestions, feel free to post them here.

Thank you.

 

The story has now been updated, Noble's Court 2.0.

I apologize for the temporary inconvenience.

 

grammartical <-- grammatical

 

I keep making these mistakes, thanks for pointing them out.

I sincerely hope my story is safe from all this.

 

What's the story about? I would assume from the title it's about a tennis player named Noble, but I could be wrong. Any intended future story lines you're planning for it?

 

The story is essentially about the lives of various characters in a fantasy world that is increasingly turbulent, currently, I only have 1 character, as the story is in its early developments.

The character is a male, and is the King of a city called Trupia.

 

I have to say I'm loving the story line with the very dominant yet loving mother and the protagonist's "sealed" climaxes. Brilliant!

 

^ What he said. Just saw it for the first time today and love your work so far. Keep it up!