I have decided to create this post for anyone interested in discussing my story: Gifted For those that don't know the story, Gifted is set in a world where a small amount of people have The Gift. It allows them to have some control over the emotions of themselves and those around them (for good or ill). The main character is emotionally numb but can "see" people's emotions. It is written in first-person, though the point of view shifts to other characters. It has some kinks that might not be for everyone, like open relationships, slut girlfriend, non-consent, and prostitution, but the story itself leans more towards plot than porn. This thread is basically for anyone who wants to talk about the story, ask questions, give feedback, etc.
okay, i had no idea that this would happen but i’m invested in the plot. i hope you continue writing this story until the end
It's extremely well written. The MC whatever his quirks or abilties is a guy you want to empathize with. Same for his girlfriend.
Glad you liked it. Jumping POVs is a lot harder than I thought it would be since I try to make the 'voice' different for each character.
