Life begins at Uni

Discussion in 'Story Feedback' started by kina2kng, Dec 6, 2020.

  1. kina2kng

    kina2kng Virgin

    Hey, I just started my first ever story. Its sort of semi-autobiographical so it may come across as a bit of a slow burn initially but wanted it to seem realistic. I don't expect it's gonna be amazing but figured I won't get good at this until I try. With that in mind, any feedback would be great and I am super keen to see what direction others would take the story in.

    https://chyoa.com/story/Life-begins-at-Uni.32701
     
    Last edited: Dec 6, 2020
  2. NaughtyOppa

    NaughtyOppa Experienced

    You need to put a link to it in your post ;-)
     
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  3. kina2kng

    kina2kng Virgin

    oh yeah forgot to, my bad fixed it now
     
  4. subgeo47

    subgeo47 Virgin

    Huge fan of the story...pls continue it... especially cuck route..plsss