Zeebop
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Zeebop

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The problem with finishing one story is that my brain turns to the next one I want to write. Jun 27, 2025

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    1. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      The problem with finishing one story is that my brain turns to the next one I want to write.
      Jun 27, 2025
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      2. Elfie
        Elfie
        Worst part is, sometimes it’s before you’ve even finished!
        Jun 27, 2025
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      3. raziel83
        raziel83
        I like this site because when I have that problem, I can leave one story for the other writers and focus on the next one.
        Jun 27, 2025
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    2. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      Well, the abbreviated Tolkienpunk epic is finished.
      Jun 25, 2025
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      2. TheLowKing
        TheLowKing
        Nice work! :)
        Jun 26, 2025
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    3. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      Have a real banger of an idea for a story, but I don't want to post it because I'll lost interest and don't have time to write it.
      Jun 3, 2025
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      2. GyroscopicGraphite
        GyroscopicGraphite
        You could try dropping it into the Story Ideas forum and hope someone picks it up eventually. Or do you want it done in a particular way you don't trust anyone else with?
        Jun 3, 2025
      3. Zeebop
        Zeebop
        I don't think anyone else would go for it, it's...too niche. Considering some of what I've written, that's saying something.
        Jun 3, 2025
      4. GyroscopicGraphite
        GyroscopicGraphite
        Well see, now you've both challenged my pride AND piqued my curiosity...
        Jun 4, 2025
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    4. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      The problem with building up to a climax is you're then stuck with trying not to fuck up the climax.
      May 23, 2025
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    5. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      "Your creampie lacks emotion. Intensity. Where is the love?"
      Apr 30, 2025
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      2. GyroscopicGraphite
        GyroscopicGraphite
        "I have given all I have to give! Tell me then, what is love?!"
        May 1, 2025
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    6. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      7,999
      Apr 22, 2025
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      2. Gambio
        Gambio
        There really should be an award for 10k chapters
        Apr 22, 2025
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    7. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      The writing is not going well.
      Apr 17, 2025
      2. raziel83
        raziel83
        What kind of issues do you have?
        Apr 19, 2025
      3. Zeebop
        Zeebop
        @raziel83 Been busy at work, not a lot of sleep, falling behind on DOOMED and really behind on Pipe-weed Dreams.
        Apr 19, 2025
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    8. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      You ever get bored and try to invent a new kink?
      Mar 20, 2025
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    9. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      Have the terrible suspicion my story would be more popular if they kept sex slaves instead of freeing them.
      Mar 17, 2025
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      2. Remin
        Remin
        No, no, no. It would be more popular if they fucked more :V
        Mar 18, 2025
      3. Zeebop
        Zeebop
        @Remin: They're fucking nearly every chapter!
        Mar 18, 2025
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      4. TheLowKing
        TheLowKing
        Only [i]nearly[/i] every chapter? Downvoted.
        Mar 19, 2025
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    10. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      The greatest fantasy in my Tolkienpunk epic is someone under fifty owning their own home.
      Mar 14, 2025
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    11. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      Plot chapter, sex chapter. Sexy plot chapter. Unsexy plot chapter. Plotty sex chapter?
      Mar 5, 2025
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      2. TheLowKing
        TheLowKing
        Chappy sex plotter. Plappy sex chat. Ex-chap splatter. Blotted Czech sap!
        Mar 6, 2025
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    12. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      Look sometimes I just have the urge to write a big-tittied orc fingering her girlfriend on the toilet until she pees. Don't judge me.
      Feb 27, 2025
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      2. Gambio
        Gambio
        You have Marcie's attention
        Feb 28, 2025
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      3. Zeebop
        Zeebop
        @Gambio Maybe when it hits 20 or 30 chapters deep I'll put it up for review.
        Feb 28, 2025
    13. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      New story, new regrets.
      Feb 4, 2025
      2. GyroscopicGraphite
        GyroscopicGraphite
        I'd rather have new regrets then the same old, same old. Though maybe that's just the gamer in me trying to 'complete the bestiary', if you know what I mean.

        Wonder if anyone's actually filled the thing...
        Feb 4, 2025
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    14. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      I like big stories and I cannot lie.
      Jan 28, 2025
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      2. GyroscopicGraphite
        GyroscopicGraphite
        You other authors can't deny.
        Jan 28, 2025
    15. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      Read some old chapters I wrote last year today and cringed.
      Jan 21, 2025
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      3. Zeebop
        Zeebop
        Not sure about that.
        Jan 22, 2025
      4. GyroscopicGraphite
        GyroscopicGraphite
        Well, it depends on how old an 'old chapter' really is. Also take into account perspective; something written a year ago by someone who's been writing for a decade is not likely to be as drastically different as someone who only started a year ago. I feel like I've grown a lot in just the last few months alone. Plus, this site lets you put a new coat of paint on some old chapters, if you know what I mean.
        Jan 23, 2025
      5. GyroscopicGraphite
        GyroscopicGraphite
        Though, for any finished stories, I wouldn't touch anything, just in case you slip in a detail that conflicts with prior or future lore.
        Jan 23, 2025
    16. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      DOOMED is going okay, and even if it didn't get another like I'd have work to do on it well into next year.
      Dec 14, 2024
      2. Zeebop
        Zeebop
        That being said, been thinking about a game-mode story I've been putting off. Might try to balance the load in January.
        Dec 14, 2024
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    17. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      Wondering if "porn for depressed people, by depressed people" is a thing.
      Oct 31, 2024
      2. raziel83
        raziel83
        That's just everything that I write.
        Nov 1, 2024
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    18. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      Final total: 7,337 chapters on Lois Lanes Night Out. Thanks to everyone who contributed chapters and comments over the years!
      Aug 4, 2024
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      2. Impregmaniac
        Impregmaniac
        Congrats!
        Aug 4, 2024
      3. TheLowKing
        TheLowKing
        I've hinted at this before, but I think it's an amazing achievement that you finished such a huge story. Most stories on CHYOA have no endings. A very small minority have one ending, [i]maybe[/i] two. But a [b]thousand[/b] endings? That's ridiculous. Insane. Unique. Unironically, I take my hat off to you. (What, no bbcode in profile posts??)
        Aug 4, 2024
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    19. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      On the one hand, sad one story is ending. On the other hand, sort of stoked to get working on another story.
      Aug 1, 2024
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      2. TheLowKing
        TheLowKing
        I've never been sad about finishing a story. I'm usually pretty glad that I can put it behind me. :P
        Aug 2, 2024
      3. Zeebop
        Zeebop
        Part of it is that I've been writing endings for this story for over a year. There are over 7k chapters and about a thousand of them are endings.
        Aug 2, 2024
      4. TheLowKing
        TheLowKing
        *shudders* Sounds like a nightmare to me. Kudos for pushing through!
        Aug 3, 2024
    20. Zeebop
      Zeebop
      Wondering if my best days of as an erotic writer are behind me.
      Jun 2, 2024
      2. Gambio
        Gambio
        Might just be the daily grind. You're doing Lois Lane for an absurd amount of time after all.

        I felt the same with Marcie and Gina and that it was starting to get a bit stale, but the forced "break" did help me get back in the groove again
        Jun 2, 2024
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      3. chris_brown
        chris_brown
        Maybe write some chapters for other stories to give you a fresh prospective might help break the monotony?
        Jun 2, 2024
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