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New story reads like she is happy! how soon before she is terrorized you evil genius?

Well don't tell us ! get writing and posting and we'll tell you if we are excited o read them!

Soon my friend soon....... I'm just trying to get it right

Getting there and adding more now, about to get to the really juicy part

Over 4k likes though!!!!! Next goal is 5 - could be waiting some time

Whoopty fucking doo. Jackass.

That was a big thing for me, it's usually one chapter a month......

Same! Will be a while in the planning stage.

Are you finally going to Give Jessica some happiness in a story?

No Jessica yet, a very cliche story though

Well, the notable writer section is weird...

I feel your pain.

The reason I haven't 'liked' the OP is that I feel you ARE a notable writer but haven't been recognized as such because unlike myself you didn't actively pursue that status while it was relatively attainable...

Link then?

https://chyoa.com/story/The-game.16258

Sorry should have put that up first

May need more than a week to gauge interest. A story i considered stopping suddenly is getting some major reading ! i say give a month before deciding!

non non-con = con ?
or:
non non-con = hardcore non-con ?

can i possible expect to see Jessica finally getting some happiness in her life?

Taking longer than initially expected - but sorry gscmar64, no Jessica in this story!!

So impressive! Best I can manage is 200

Think I hit on lucky when I joined and amassed a lot of likes and favourites at the beginning. Overwhelmed by the amount in the last two days though

Feels great to get a hot story. Keep it up man! :)

I hate it when that happens.

Thats gotta be heartbreaking.

I wouldn't mind but it's been do long and word on my phone just isn't responding

What do you want to write about? New story? Addition?

May i suggest that you try to write something Where Jessica isn't abused. Say an infatuation and eventual catching of a love interest in High school before you turned her life into a living hell! Please for her sake let her know some type of happiness!

Although I agree with trying to write a happier tale of Jessica, I started the stories with her young, I can't really go much further back and could change the older stories? But I agree and has been something that I've thought about.

Suppose I could write another story into collection? Where it all began? Then have the last chapter lead into the first?

That has been rather enjoyable! And I have a bunch of ideas to follow up now :)

Well........ That's underwhelming, perhaps I've lost whatever made the other stories successful or perhaps it wasn't as good as I thought it was :-/

This could spell the end of current stories for the moment and I may move onto a new idea that has been floating around.

Stick with what you've got.

can i suggest you put your self on a type of schedule when you update at least one thread each day. Finds for me it been tending to work with the stories i been keeping activate

She left?

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/WebOriginal/OverlySarcasticProductions

My Red character is most certainly, a lot more different

Thank you very much

I personally find myself with a severe disconnect between the first chapter and the second...

I'll admit Nemo I wanted to get into the action very quickly - opposed to my others

But also the first chapter was just a quick way to introduce the setting

Get well soon!

There's hope. You can still rhyme : )

Drink fluids. Whatever you can keep down. Water or tea or something with a little sugar for energy or vitamin C or maybe some electrolytes.

I feel you.
Everything comes to an end, the bad things like the good ones.
Hang in there.

yes get to it, Jessica is getting extra horny!

Yes! Jessica is lonely and Lara needs to be spanked!

I'm thinking Jessica might need to invite someone round to her flat to help her out in my latest chapter??

Or perhaps Jessica and Lara are captured like how you did Red