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  1. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Hey guys. Merry Christmas I guess. Okay. So it's been months. Literally months. First I wanted to have this branch wrapped by the 1-year anniversary in October. When that went past, I decided to set a new goal for finishing by New Years, and that's looking... well, I wouldn't hold my breath...
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    Music to Write Porn By

    Always happy to make a new Delain fan! They're doing their first US headline tour next year, with support from Hammerfall. I saw them opening for Sonata Arctica, for Kamelot, and for Nightwish over the years, they are... SUPERB live. One of the best live acts I've ever seen. Can't WAIT to see a...
  3. edwards21

    Music to Write Porn By

    I listen to either video game music or a band called Delain. They're a Symphonic Metal band out of... Holland I think, I may have to look it up, and their lead singer Charlotte has the perfect porn-writing combination of being incredibly sexy and having an incredible voice.
  4. edwards21

    Two month long writer's block. I... I can't stand this. I just want to finish this damn story!

    Two month long writer's block. I... I can't stand this. I just want to finish this damn story!
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    Favourite Authors

    Aaron Allston (RIP) Richard Belzer* Dennis Lehane George R. R. Martin Eric Plume John Sandford David Simon Walter Jon Williams * = If you haven't read "I am Not a Cop" and you enjoy funny books, READ THIS IMMEDIATELY.
  6. edwards21

    What lead you to Chyoa?

    I got lead here from the /r/freeuse subreddit, and got inspired. I wish I could say more than that, but I honestly started writing REALLY quickly after discovering this site, and that's been my focus here ever since.
  7. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Okay! So yet another month-long writer's block cleared up. This represents the last of the vignettes. Two chapters to go and this route will be complete! I admit, there's no plot purpose for Alex's newest gangbang. I just decided that I wanted to put her in a gangbang. I may try to be a writer...
  8. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Please don't delete anything. There's nothing wrong with what's there dude. Even if it is an "alternate continuity" or whatever, it's not like there aren't plenty of those. My route also differs heavily from other Alex routes in terms of content, and especially of other characters.
  9. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    *Usual list of excuses*
  10. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Yay! I finally got to write a scene for Rachel! And it's in-bounds without messing with Stone's stuff! I've been waiting for an excuse to do that for a while now. I knew the emotional focus was going to be between Alex and Pat, with Hope and Cassie as a secondary focus, but that left Rachel out...
  11. edwards21

    Sneak Peek at Chyoa 2

    Any chance we can get a forum link on the topbar? Might make navigating between a story and a discussion thread a bit easier.
  12. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Just published the third of five or six vignette pieces, before the last two "real" epilogue chapters. So fun fact, the DP scene was one of the big reasons this epilogue exists. DPs are one of my favorite sexual fetishes, and because of the "anal as rite of passage" thing I was doing in the...
  13. edwards21

    @Doadventures.10 That just happened to me. Anonymous dislikes are not cool. At least tell me how...

    @Doadventures.10 That just happened to me. Anonymous dislikes are not cool. At least tell me how I can improve!
  14. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    I debated whether or not to write this. Apparently Vignettes pt. 2 earned me my very first Dislike. I guess for as long as I've been going on this story, that's not surprising, but I think the thing that bugs me the most is that it was anonymous. I don't have anyone to ask where I went wrong, or...
  15. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Okay, this is getting to be too much. I'm going to break it up, post one or two vignettes as individual chapters every couple of days starting today. This thing's going to be a bear to read in its current form.
  16. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Six... thousand... words. That's how long this next chapter is, and I'm not even done. Probably another thousand before I send this one off. My vignettes idea is actually working perfectly... I'm just a fuckin' verbose writer. I'd love to split it up, but there's just nowhere to do it. It all...
  17. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    So some notes on the newest chapter. My original plan for it was just the conversation between Alex and Cassie, though I realized very quickly that there just wasn't enough content for the chapter. So I started thinking about the practical consequences of Alex's romp that night. I thought to...
  18. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Okay, proofing the next one now. If I were more sadistic, I might be considered to use this next chapter as a finale, but don't worry, there are still two or three more to go. I still have a few loose ends to tie up.
  19. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    I feel so relieved now that it's out there. Two months worth of picking away at that one. It isn't even all that special! Man... Adulting can suck sometimes, takes so much time away from the fun shit.
  20. edwards21

    "Moving to the Sexworld" Discussion

    Buddy, if I had one, I'd have been using it by now.
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