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  1. TheLowKing

    Pictures in Stories- Yes or No?

    The thing is you don't have to describe her at all. Call her a hot MILF, include a couple of highlights on her major features (physical or otherwise!), and your readers will be fully capable of filling in the blanks themselves. Certainly don't make exhaustive lists of details about how many...
  2. TheLowKing

    Getting people to read your story

    The data has since shifted: Tuesday is worst!!! Only 11.5% of my likes on this story came in on a Tuesday. Sunday is best for raw likes, 16.0%. No doubt due to all those people coming out of church with a renewed desire for carnal sin, and feeling very thankful when they find it. Monday is best...
  3. TheLowKing

    Lost the story

    If you never pressed save, then it was never saved. If you did press save, it might be in your recently deleted chapters: https://chyoa.com/list/recently-deleted I strongly recommend you write offline, and only copy-paste to CHYOA when you're ready, to avoid issues just like this.
  4. TheLowKing

    Getting views

    Of course there's an element of chance involved. You'll see different stories on the front page depending on when you visit, for example. But people don't randomly pick stories to read, they choose based on very clear pieces of information (some of which you mentioned and others I mentioned in...
  5. TheLowKing

    Getting views

    Here are a bunch of tips that don't require you to be a good writer. :P https://forum.chyoa.com/threads/getting-people-to-read-your-story.6343/
  6. TheLowKing

    (Booo, the candle emoji doesn't work.)

    (Booo, the candle emoji doesn't work.)
  7. TheLowKing

    That's probably a good sign! It suggests that you're handling these things in a reasonably...

    That's probably a good sign! It suggests that you're handling these things in a reasonably realistic way. (Assuming that's what you're after, of course. After all, realism isn't mandatory.)
  8. TheLowKing

    I think another aspect is that you need an account to leave likes, people who come to the site...

    I think another aspect is that you need an account to leave likes, people who come to the site often are more likely to have an account, and people who come to the site often are more likely to see your story early than people who don't. Then when you stop posting updates, your...
  9. TheLowKing

    Views also dropped a lot, but not as much as likes did. In the 10 days before I posted the last...

    Views also dropped a lot, but not as much as likes did. In the 10 days before I posted the last chapter, the story got about 1000 views/day. Afterwards: 340 views/day. Whereas it went from 148 likes/day in the same 10 days, to zero, zip, nada.
  10. TheLowKing

    If anything, readers who find an old story because they like its niche would leave /more/ likes...

    If anything, readers who find an old story because they like its niche would leave /more/ likes than people who just trawl the most recently updated stories. I suspect that instead I got most of my likes from people who favourited my story. Once I stopped posting updates, those people...
  11. TheLowKing

    Published my last chapter on October 4. Got my last like on October 6. Then nothing, for 10 days...

    Published my last chapter on October 4. Got my last like on October 6. Then nothing, for 10 days straight, during which time the story got 2500 views. Not complaining! No need for pity likes. :P Just thought it was funny/interesting.
  12. TheLowKing

    It's interesting that as soon as you stop publishing chapters, the likes stop coming in too.

    It's interesting that as soon as you stop publishing chapters, the likes stop coming in too.
  13. TheLowKing

    Matters of Perspective. Choosing a POV

    Novelty is interesting. The domme already has a harem, adding one more sub to it is probably a relatively small change. Whereas the sub enters a whole new world: a new domme, new fellow subs, possibly a new home... It's a lot, and there's probably more things to explore from his perspective than...
  14. TheLowKing

    Hush, Tjf. Site is dead. No talking allowed!

    Hush, Tjf. Site is dead. No talking allowed!
  15. TheLowKing

    Improvements to deleted stories

    Why have auto-removal at all?
  16. TheLowKing

    Permanent Nudity and My Niche

    24/7 nudity can be interesting, but I think it's important that it's not casual. In your story Heath's Humiliation, for example, it's very clear that this is not an everyday situation for Heath or the people around him. He's not just living his ordinary life, same as always except he's nude...
  17. TheLowKing

    You have a deceptively tall knock.

    You have a deceptively tall knock.
  18. TheLowKing

    Current Creator of Heath’s Humiliation Here asking for Feedback!

    I think your friend wrote the uncredited parts, but I didn't want to skip past the first chapters because they're so, so important. And it's actually a solid start. No long descriptions, straight into the meat of things: new school, woefully unprepared protagonist. Good mental image, let's go...
  19. TheLowKing

    Dun dun dunnnn

    Dun dun dunnnn
  20. TheLowKing

    Improvements to deleted stories

    A simpler approach might be to use the "Recently Deleted" section. As far as I know it currently only includes stories that you yourself deleted, but chapters deleted by others could be treated the same way. You'd lose the story structure, yes, but since you wouldn't have access to the deleted...
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