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I have to admit that i did not read past the introduction chapter! It just didn't make click. In my opinion the introduction is to short, does't give exactly many details about the main character, and no details at all about his "friends", who are probably the main focus of the story. It does...

What about "negative" comments? I.e. something like: "Sorry, i don't like where this is going. Why does the guy suddenly turn into an asshole?" I personally so far kept the motto: Live and let live. I don't have to like everything. And for everything i do not like, there will probably be many...

I like the setting. ;-) And i very much like the contributions by fyreant! :-) Will try to add more chapters myself, but it might take some time, as time is not something i have in abundance these next weeks. Invited to birthdays, have to travel for work, etc.

I actually like John Doe!

Now 8 out of 10 chapters in the list are from "The Gamer, Chyoa edition" by TheDespaxas! ;-)

At first i wanted to write: "I agree with Funatic's assessment, that "us" author's are more likely to comment already." But then i thought about the occasions, where i myself last commented on another authors story to give some feedback, and i can't remember it ;-) And thinking more about it...

These "quest" stories, where the reader chooses between several options, seem to attract the most comments (although most of them then are limited to "B. A. C. A. D." ). But otherwise: Honestly no idea. I feel it is important to reply to the comments that you do get, to show other readers that...

So many likes, views and favorites in such a short time, as well as several contributing authors. One could easily get jealous! It looks like you really hit the Jackpot with that story idea ;-) From my point of view, the selling point of the story is the gamer, the developments of his skills...