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Okay, so I just read the first Hermione sex scene from your story 'Celeb and movie Maledom' and I felt it was solid (although admittedly I am not big on fan fiction). The grammar is much better and this makes the work easy to follow (although you did spell Draco with all lower cases in the...

You do realize these two things will deeply affect your writing INCLUDING any sex scenes in a negative way? I also really do not understand why you would intentionally write with poor grammer and sentence structure, outside of rare context (slurred speech, text messages). It frankly makes your...

Admittedly that was the intention of the story for it to be a rush.

Recently adapted some of my short stories from Noveltrove to CHOYA https://chyoa.com/chapter/Introduction.432876

https://chyoa.com/story/One-Gloryhole-Outside-Breeding%2C-Kentucky.18984/map The glory hole is open for business, for those of you who would like to drop by.

Both good points

It could be fun, but I don't exactly why it should be limited to 10 chapters.

Nailed it.

Nothing wrong with leaving the world somewhat open. If I have any advice, don't be afraid to put your foot down if you feel someone is making their character too powerful too early. If this story is about a character rising up the ranks, then they need to struggle to begin with. Second, you...

Whilst I agree that the vast majority of good stories do have a strong hook to begin with, that hook doesn't have to be sex. I'd rather learn about this frisky space crew before the action than cut in halfway between the action. Why are they on the space craft? Research? Exploration? Space...

I'd still advise you take contributing to other stories into consideration. CHYOA presents a series of unique challenges compared to writing a short story: -Maintaining continuity and continuing story threads. It can be easy to lose one's place in a story -How long do you make a chapter? Too...

Well if anyone does give you crap, they either 1. Haven't put anything out there at all 2. Are on a similar level to you 3. Were once on your level and have forgotten that they needed practice too Also, as one last piece of advice: rather than creating stories, to begin with, it might be better...