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Thank you. Yeah, it's a concept in a lot of games where you can fall through the map by accident or on purpose. I think my weakness regarding question prompts is that I may be ending chapters prematurely or too late instead of looking for a natural point to end, and give the reader a choice...

For putting up the kid for adoption, I see an easy solution that makes it not fucked up. This is in the future, why not have the society abolish the nuclear family structure? Kids are raised by a socialized system with their peers. To get an idea of what this could look like, read The Dispossessed.

CC https://chyoa.com/chapter/Pink-Lingerie.1100134 This at the time, was the longest sex scene I wrote. I was really proud of it, and thought I had improved over my earlier chapters.

https://chyoa.com/story/5-Day-1-Month.42462 Hi. I'm a very new writer. I'm wondering how you think I might improve, or if there's anything you like about my story.