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    A discussion on CHYOA Rules

    In CHYOA, most humans act like animals in stories so I don't see the issue. :p Jokes aside, I think as long as you convey the animal is sapient and (sexually) an adult you shouldn't have any issues with the guidelines. There's lots of stories with animalistic demons raping female paladins so...
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    A discussion on CHYOA Rules

    "I now pronounce you husband and trampoline." Ah, marital bliss...
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    Wishful thinking

    If only we had a Life Dashboard...
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    Lack of time travel stories

    If you're doing that to yourself... is it rape... or masturbation?
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    Lack of time travel stories

    I'd imagine a fake moustache would work wonders in the 1400s... :D
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    Do scattered story maps turn you away?

    I think that branches where your choices have meaningful consequences are mostly fulfilling to read. There's a tendency for some of the open stories to have bewildering options before a story has had any chance to go anywhere, before you can establish a character. I think that has a habit to...
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    Tags for chapters

    This is very helpful. Thank you!
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    Tags for chapters

    Speaking of tags, is there a list somewhere of the current tags that are available?
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    I plan, you write? Maybe?

    I was watching a Matthew Colville video on YouTube about being a dungeon master, and one of the points of advice was to just start a dungeon with just six rooms, because that's all that you'll need to run a session of D&D. So maybe what you need to do is just write a couple of stories about...
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    How do you decide on a POV?

    Very well put. Also, 2nd Person is great for when you're being hunted by Shia LaBeouf.
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    Do scattered story maps turn you away?

    Another thing that makes me close a story is and extensive list of immersion variables. When I come to a story and they want me to conjure up a suitable name for my aunts ex-girlfriends former roommates dry cleaner I just nope right outta there.
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    I plan, you write? Maybe?

    Ah yes, sounds like a classic world-building obsession. I feel your pain, it seems like a thousand concepts race through my brain (usually at around two in the morning) and the temptation to put my current projects on the back burner and plough ahead with this shiny new concept.
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    Strange message

    Got a similar one from JenniferAi242 about two hours ago: "Wow, sweety! Reading is excellent! I'm not wearing bra! I'm all burning! Maybe get to know closer? Write to me here xxx My nickname is JenniferU0351"
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    Reading your own stories

    Oh yes, compounded when you've got Game Mode variables to consider!
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    Writing about breast size

    Possibly even taller, especially with the amount of superhero stories on here...
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    Building interest in a story

    I tend to agree with this. Googling the characteristics of this "average high school boy" and finding out if his hair and eye colour correspond with a racial stereotype. If your character is blond with blue eyes, pre-assigning them with a Germanic or Dutch name (even though it's a variable)...
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    Writing about breast size

    I dunno, I still think using bra size to describe a woman's breasts is like using underwear size to describe a man's penis. On that note though, if you want to utilise bra sizes in your story it's your story to do with as you please.
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    Amount of game mode data shown to readers

    I must confess, I've played a couple of game mode stories where no game data at all is visible during the session. You start to think "Is this a game or are they just pulling my leg?"
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    Bad Endings

    The Virgin Heroine by hematoma has some good examples of bad endings.
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    How difficult should it be to get laid in an interactive erotica?

    Oh, I think I get it now. The hidden chapter that redirects the reader to the linked chapter counts in the "previous chapter" limit, so it costs two chapters instead of one.
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