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I haven't had a chance to really get into the story but here are some general tips that might help. 1. Have a list of all your variables, so you know what each variable means. Make it public if you want to help other authors adding to your story. 2. Initialize variables early, or some of your...

I have a chapter Lust of the jungle flesh that has been waiting for approval for about two months now. https://chyoa.com/chapter/A-presentation.437724 The chapter after it has only been waiting for a couple days, but you may want to publish it as well (Sixth hasn't been online for 6 months).

It was easy to find with this list by RicoLouis

A similar suggestion has been made. https://forum.chyoa.com/threads/a-small-but-significant-improvement-to-game-mode.1664/ Personally, I usually just use default names. How the character looks or acts is more important. But by creating an account, they would get a new feature (having the name...

There's a user called Miranda that only has two comments (both links). https://chyoa.com/user/Miranda

When I've see it i assumed it was because they wanted to delete the chapter or their account.

What sort of things would you like/expect to see in a chapter like that?

I tried to solve the problem of quantity over quality with this suggestion. Either will work for me. It does feel a little weird that if i decide to read a bit of a story and discover it's not for me, i hurt it's ranking a bit. But I think that's fine as long as there are still the current...

I find words like “tall,” “small,” and “short” can be dull and vague sometimes. My favorite descriptions talk about something relative to the environment or characters. Things like “towering over” or “having to duck.” And I think numbers have a place. “The bouncer was 6 ft 5 and weighted 263.14...

I feel the best way to describe something is to talk about how it effects the characters or situation. After that I like fruit analogies for boobies because it brings to mind ideas of nomming on them. I think measurements can work if the writer is casual enough. People guess measurements a lot...

Most of the time, I have the next chapter significantly written, but not edited. I like to know I'm not writing myself into a corner.

The one written, directed and produced by an alien? (according to Captain Marvel) I think Nemo was talking about "Room." Of course, I'm not to familiar with whatever that thing Tommy Wiseau did, so if you said Tommy was nursing in that film I would believe you.

That's a good idea, but I'm a little worried that my browser will for some reason load the text from when I started writing that day (stupid I know) and I won't notice until I hit save, and I don't know if it works when creating a new chapter. (I don't think creating a chapter and editing it are...

Cool fact, but are you talking about the film "Room" from 2015 starring Brie Larson?

Being shaped like anal toys. Arteries on the surface would give the penis a pulsing feeling and bring a new meaning to "feeling his heartbeat quicken."

While writing, I try to save like I'm playing a Sierra adventure game. It would be nice to be able to save the chapter without going to the viewing page, so I don't lose my flow. I admit it's a little petty, but I figured I might as well suggest it anyway.

Sorry. I absolutely did and am still a little confused. Are you talking about adding side characters that other authors suggested? On a side note, talking about the kind of story (kinks, plot, goals) you will be writing may get more people interested. Even then you might not get help until you...

Why? Please correct me if I'm wrong but you're talking using game mode to let the reader pick their name. Wouldn't it be much less work to use the built in customization function. I guess you could do nicknames this way, but its a lot easier to write {first_name} than 10-15 nested if functions...

Whatever is easiest. If you are on a role for a particular branch, keep writing. If its becoming a slog or your getting writer's block, finish your though put in a bit of resolution and try somewhere else. Readers will want chapters as fast as possible. As long as you're not perpetually starting...

Thanks. If it helps, 520 seems to show up when saving edits. It then seems to brick the chapter completely. Maybe it has something to do with updating cloudflare's cache of the website.