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I'm interested, but i haven't watched one piece in a long time. Do you know if tsuj would be willing to give my work a look over before publishing incase I make a mistake.

I agree adding one or two chapters to someone else's story can show you what you are good and can achieve before you start writing that story about being able to mind control any celebrity you want. Also, your telling a tale not filing a patent application. You can use technical writing if you...

I would imagine many of the same things you do for battle scenes would work for sex scenes. Explore the details that are important and let the reader fill in the rest. Whenever I have trouble figuring out what is important or don't have enough details I ask "why is this event/opportunity/action...

I wouldn't. I recomend changing PoVs as little as possible and make it clear you are changing with transitions or chapter titles

I think it can work if you are changing perspective and telling a different type of story. But keep in mind readers are there for a 2nd person story. They might not want a story that goes somewhere else or talks about somebody else. Instead, you could do something like this... "So there was...

Stay away from forcing exposition, but if you can work have a character introduce themselves naturally, you should. For example the latex zoo could have a receptionist for Anna to talk to and explain her goals. This would give subtle insight into her reaction to latex. Is she curious? weirded...

I think targetthyself means he doesn't like reading game stories and doesn't know how to write with variables. However, before I read the Chyoa guide, I thought the reader was supposed to keep track of the variables by hand making them both confusing and annoying.

For what it's worth, variables are also used in stories. They allow you to track decisious without creating a whole new branch. And I personally felt the CHYOA guide explained variables fairly well. Have you read it?

Is there a list of features that will be in the new Formula Parser somewhere?

There are a few fetishes revolving around treating the perverted, dirty, and raunchy as completely normal.

Again, it doesn't have to be a full sex scene. Foreplay would be fine. In your story the Curse of the Black Ooze you have breast sucking and gender swap in the introdution. Sexy acts that let the reader know what kind of story to expect. And there are plenty of was to write a sex scene but have...

We have different definitions of Open World. You can (and should) write a rich world full of opportunities for authors to add their own spin. There are a few stories on this site where the owner wrote a two paragraph introduction. The author then writes a tree of costomization chapters until...

You said what I was trying to say with the Skyrim comment except way better I think we will have to agree to disagree on this. Your correct forcing sex into a story will ruin it, but the majority of modern TV shows open with a hook. Or imagine a story set on a starship with frisky crew. It...

For what its worth, I think completely user generated would be easier and have less drama.

I like the idea but don't know if I read enough to vote fairly. There will also be some people upset when they don't get picked. Two questions; Have you considered categories for specific fetishes? Is this going to be completely user run or are you looking for official support?

I hope you will let me be a hard ass for a moment. Do not even try to be open world. Skyrim had several proffesionals working fulltime for years focused solely on writing and story structure. If you think you can write a story where you can do anything and be anyone you will end up...

Completed may not be the best term. I know its not the norm, but there are good stories where the owner has more or less finished the story arc(s). Its very easy for these stories to fade into obscurity. Yes, it is possible for someone else to come along and add to the story, but most of the...

You're in the right sub-forum, but I think these suggestions would do better with their own threads. That way people can like the ones they want and let the mods know what features interest them.

1. 95% of everything is crap. That includes 95% of the stories on this site. 2. Sometimes readers want to do more than just hit the like button on a story. We all have those stories that are really well writen, but only have a few chapters for you to like. 3. Once a story is completed (arguably...

Sorry to get off topic, but what are spoiler tags?