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I've got a new poll out; please select up to 2 options. Answering it would help me out, I've got some plans in the works and would love to hear from you all as to what and who I should focus my efforts onto. Please be honest; this is also not just to focus on another character; I also want to...

I've got a new poll up... I'm trying to figure out what characters people want to see the most. Plus I might have a surprise coming up.

I have that problem; especially if you have a long running story. Almost never can I get back into writing an old story. There is just so much you have forgotten, plot points. Now in order to help me continue longer stories I take extensive notes.

Same... But hello Talonias; welcome. To SilverSpectre here is his work, well the one he seems to be working on right now.

Sorry, everyone, I've been taking a break; I needed to relax as the next addition is draining me. As for the re-population issue brought up by Durzan, I have a plan; I've been working on it since the MC arrived at the colony. There are more humans on the planet than would be initially thought...

Are you talking about the Volsung's and Andvaranaut? When I hear of that my mind goes to Lord of The Rings, as Tolkien used that as the inspiration for his story, even Glaurung during his first age was killed in a similar way as the dragon in that saga. Edit (However, yes I would love to read a...

I think it could be interesting. I would like to read that. I will have to look into that, might be a while before it is added, but it would be helpful to look at it. How obscure are we talking here, what time-period, in my free time I study religions both ancient and modern; so I would love...

Everyone has their style of writing, based around their personal history, vocabulary, use of punctuation, personal word preference, etc. It is not a bad or a good thing unless it impacts someone's ability to read the story; it is just what it is. I think of it like a story's texture; you feel...

I think maybe chapter edit would be best, just a drag and drop, or arrows to rearrange the order. So say you have variables like Variable 2 Variable 1 Have a way to move them to Variable 1 Variable 2 I would assume that the order there would determine the order on the sidebar. And for like...

I feel that The New World is my first story, while people liked it; I've had to multiple times go through it, adding and removing paragraphs, finding mistakes, and so on. It is quite honestly a headache. I have one too, I'm only 12 chapters in, and it is only basically a prologue with character...

Yeah, probably the biggest headache I've had recently, so sure this gets my vote.

My story just reached 5,000 likes, yes; I'm glad people are liking it.

Nonsense, that is not a thing. I would add that it is crucial to like even after someone has been writing for a long time, get them to continue after the inspiration has gone away.

Yeah is kind of have that, I've got a long word document which details characters, their backstories, and likes, the world, what is on it. It also has various choices, I've only got 4 right now, and they diverge in a butterfly-like effect, i.e., they start similar, but the outcome is vastly...

Eh hello, am Actiaeon, I started writing on this site, because I sucked at writing intimate moments between characters. It was the worst at writing-wise; so posting on this site is practice for improving my writing ability. A skill I have no real reason to learn it besides, I want to. I don't...

Wow, it is honestly a good MS paint drawing. Well, I guess some people can see them as a bit of a crutch, you still do need to describe the place after all, but it does help visualize a setting. A picture is worth a thousand words, after all. However, I would agree that they would be wrong if...

This user is a scammer https://chyoa.com/user/xaxakolilx, they commented a suspicious link, and their home page is a scam site.

I know what you mean, you really want feedback but nope, nothing, I feel that; so you know what I'll bite. The story is great, I mean you got story of the week, so I mean that must be something. I've also found two typos that I commented on. I very much like the map of the bunker, I kind of...

Twilight Eden (The New World) is something I've been working on for awhile now, I'm just remembering that in fact there is a forum, and that I should probably post a Feedback thread. https://chyoa.com/story/Twilight-Eden.10861 I would love to hear your feedback, as it helps me keep going, and...