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I came back after a 3 year break and wrote this story in a couple days https://chyoa.com/chapter/Introduction.1879829 Then after getting some advice and feedback, I tried adjusting the character personalities of my characters. How does the story read? What suggestions can you offer?

Story Link I wanted some feedback on how the story is going. I kinda feel like overhauling the current chapters, adding more detail about her home life and tweaking the plot elements. Possibly inserting two chapters before the current ones and shifting them all down a bit? I'm not sure how the...

https://chyoa.com/story/A-Good-View.37586 So I am several chapters deep on two different paths. I just wanted some feedback on the style so far before I get too much writing done. Firstly: POV Is the 2nd person POV working here? I know it fits with the "Choose your own adventure" style but I'm...

Hi I have a story and I am not sure if it is pending, or approved. Some chapters show as published and have views. Other chapters show as "In Review" I had the option to approve the chapters yesterday, but I can't do it with the new ones? https://chyoa.com/story/A-Good-View.37586 Screenshot...