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  1. Javalar

    Problem with stories on this site

    I invite everyone who is at least slightly interested in BDSM to contribute to my story https://chyoa.com/story/The-Invitation.9867 which uses "rooms" and encounters where you can wander from A to B and have little adventures that either change your stats, let you find stuff or are just little...
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    Asian Persuasion

    People normally replace the "What's next?" with THE END or [END] or something like that to indicate that this is supposed to be an ending. As far as I can see, other writers respect that.
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    If-statements in chapter titles

    Not sure this is technically possible. Also: if-conditions are only displayed when you start game mode. So to everyone else the titel would read "Press button". But I am not sure it's possible anyway, because the title is not the same as a text field.
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    Would Anyone Like to do a Chapter Trade?

    I would be open to a chapter trade. I am not very active here recently, though. But I like the idea, and yay for more community interaction!
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    Thirty Stories Trophy: reward those who adopted abandoned stories as well as original work.

    I am not saying that there are not some exceptions, and of course, great writers can turn even a bad or mediocre first chapter into something awesome. My point that I am not exactly sure why investing time, effort and skill into continuing a One-chapter-story should have more value for CHYOA...
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    Thirty Stories Trophy: reward those who adopted abandoned stories as well as original work.

    There are a lot of 1 chapter stories which are simply bad and well left alone. There's often a reason these were not expanded, it seems to me. Isn't it much more fun for all sides if people actually really work together on stories the initiator is enthusiastic about?
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    Chapters only indent for branches

    That looks like a good solution for linear stories but like a desaster for stories with lots of branches.
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    % of non-dead-ends, % of multiple choices.

    Not sure it's possible, but great idea.
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    Like Fishing: Good, Bad, Indifferent?

    I also think that "Call to action" is a much more neutral term, as "like fishing" sounds similar to "fishing for compliments" or other terms, which have a slight pejorative twist, as if somebody would try to lure people to click "like", although they actually don't want to. In my opinion...
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    "Edit silently" should be the default behaviour

    No, there could be major edits where a whole chapter is rewritten, or several paragraphs added, maybe also some hidden conditional paragraphs in game mode. The distinction has its merit. I still agree that edit silently should be default.
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    Mindslaver CYOA

    Yes, those were examples from the top of my head. You write what you like, obviously. Others can add what they like. That's the beauty of CHYOA, after all.
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    Mindslaver CYOA

    Okay, so my thoughts are basically along these lines: I would probably start with an early choice which involves 3-4 branches in the beginning. That gives the reader something to choose and experience different paths according to their liking, but is still manageable. So, in this case, for...
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    Implemented Top Chapters - only allow a single chapter with the same author+story combination.

    I understand where you're coming from, but having obviously closely watched how the chapter was rising through the ranks, I still believe that the main push came from being placed in the "top10" section. At least, it was a combination of both. Plus, for a very long time, the chapter actually...
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    [CHYOA Universe] Erotica Search Engine

    Wonderful stuff! Great site!
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    Mindslaver CYOA

    I like the concept and some of those cards gave me new ideas for bits and pieces of stories, but I have the impression that the choices are so endless, it might be difficult to fit this all into one story. The stories coming out from this might be all very, very different and would probably...
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    Implemented Top Chapters - only allow a single chapter with the same author+story combination.

    I am sad to hear this, and I disagree: I implemented several "please don't forget to vote if you like a chapter" notes in my stories. I always paid attention to not write a blunt, boring abstract but to somehow incorporate those into the story. Most of them did not gather a lot of extra votes...
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    which of these ideas would you most likely add to

    For me it would be #2, as I see most potential for a clear story arch and some kind of reachable goal which people can work towards to. Although I must say the plot looks a bit simple and straightforward. I do see potential for a game mode story where he has to learn how to control the thing and...
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    Multi-language story

    Well, I am happy to help out with any German vocabulary. ;)
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    Collaboration Sought: "MILF Street"

    Is this supposed to become a linear story? With all those ideas and subplots, even a simple sex scene branch could lead to the frustrating feeling of having to copy everything a second branch develops.
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    Make Dwarves Sexy Again! #MDSA
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