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  1. Artican

    is patreonizing now! https://www.patreon.com/artican

    is patreonizing now! https://www.patreon.com/artican
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    A rough view of chyoa stories.

    Something tells me that if someone put up a sex story about statistics, Rico would be all over it. ;)
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    Stories For Deletion

    You should see the crap they put on YouTube these days. Not everyone's going to putting out Shakespeare here. It's even more demoralizing when your work is deemed unfit to keep. If the moderator's prerogative is to give everyone a chance, I don't think it's our call to deny that to anyone. No...
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    Something I don't see much FtM transformation

    I'm sure it's got the same sort of appeal as being 'taken' by a confident and sexy woman. Pure primal wish fulfilment.
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    Something I don't see much FtM transformation

    FtM transformation reminds me of the movies She's the Man with Amanda Bynes and The Hot Chick with Rob Shneider. Both were entertaining and cast a realistic portrayal of a woman either masquerading or transformed into a man and their interactions with others. The relationship between Bynes and...
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    Have some cybersex. Publish it.

    Try Second Life. Seems to be a popular pastime there.
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    Have some cybersex. Publish it.

    Or narrate it like a fly on the wall. Describe the actions like a play by play to keep the spontaneity of the moment.
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    Difficult Times

    Yeah, I totally missed that she was dreaming about her father. I must have been skimming. If you had the father says sarah, then shout it and sarah gets confused, then wakes up to someone shouting her name in the distance to warn her of the attack, that might be a good transition from dream to...
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    Difficult Times

    When I read through that exerpt, it felt like the girl was younger than I think you intended. The exuberant child being told a bedtime story vibe. Also, it might help add to the tension if you do elaborate on the dangers they are facing. How many are there? Is it just the father and...
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    I had an odd thought.

    Although now I'm thinking about a sex robot story. There's got to be a fetish for that sort of thing.
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    I had an odd thought.

    It would be hard to implement considering you'd need to be able to input option selections after each chapter. I'd say it would need to be long stories with options coming infrequently because that would feel more immersive than being asked what you want to happen next every other minute...
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    Niche vs. Broad Appeal

    It's hard to say when I'm writing to cater to myself or to others. I like to think I can write anything with some degree of acceptance but not because I'm pandering to a particular audience. Generally I assume people like what I like and if I do have a particularly specific kink, that I spread...
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    A Woman Scorned - Looking for Contributors

    Cool, I can work with that.
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    A Woman Scorned - Looking for Contributors

    It would help to have a name at least to go off of. I don't like to name other people's characters. First name, last name and important character descriptions and traits will help to keep the story streamlined with multiple writers. It's hard to refer to characters without these and...
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    A Woman Scorned - Looking for Contributors

    So... what is the name of the protagonist?
  16. Artican

    Family Heritage

    It's like you know me. :eek:
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    A Woman Scorned - Looking for Contributors

    I'll give it a go. I've got an idea on something to add.
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    Going Full Gay

    The benefit of having multiple option trees is that you can do both. If a story thread is unpopular because of the direction it went in, you could always backtrack and lead it to a more popular direction. That way, you can write for your own interests as well as appeasing the fans.
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    Organize your chapters by story, included posts on other people's stories

    I'd like to see an area in the chapters section of my profile that organizes my chapter posts by story so I can find my latest posts on other people's stories. (Finding chapters in my own stories is fine since I have my story tab). I've posted on a few people's stories but have lost track of...
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    Problem with deleted threads

    When threads are deleted, do they exist in a limbo sort of space where you have to use a direct web address to access them? I remember when one of my stories seemed to have a vestigial page hanging after it was deleted or something. Maybe writers could have an access page to all their chapters...
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