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I'd like to try out a story like this, only I don't follow the steps to set it up.

Ending as in writing up a conclusion?

Wife sends the man on diet and fitness camp run by holistic health gurus. After not fitting in with the rest of the group, the coordinators offer him a chance to live in his ideal body as a way to condition him into living a healthy lifestyle. Through a ritual that is a mixture of herbal...

So in this example, the story could prevent the reader from advancing the plot until they've gotten enough clothes? Like say, trying to enter a convenient store with no shirt or shoes?

So, what sort of story examples would this be applicable to?

Your account name makes so much more sense now! :D I think keeping a masculine voice would make for some entertaining situations in the vein of a sitcom. The character would need something that could potentially give him/herself away for any tension to come up in the story. There could be...

I tried viewing the site in Explorer and it was a mess. You might have better luck using Chrome or Firefox.

It's tricky to come down from the high of a good sex scene. You get the urge to top it with an even better scene right away. Slowing down the story feels like you are suffocating it but without good pacing the story fizzles out and you end up with the typical sexfest. I would say the story's...

I only write on CHYoA. I haven't had a timeout, but I don't linger on the post either. If I get stuck, I save draft and come back to it later. This keeps me from having to force something out while preventing me from dawdling. It does prevent me from opening up a new post sometimes because I...

Firstly, you can edit a post from other writers if you're the owner of the story, so no need to worry over that. Secondly, there are a few stories out there that are in this vein of mechanic, so don't feel out of place by including your own version. Zingiber has been doing a Harry Potter...

I don't seem to have owner rights. I just wanted to out up a picture on the title page.

Thank you!

Can I take ownership of U.S.S. ISHTAR again, please? I don't think Xenolsn is coming back anytime soon.

I lost a whole chapter because a pop up erased all my work when I tried to fill in the next chapter question. :mad: On my ipad the pop ups open a new page where the old one was and then opens a new tab for the old page. Of course, the old page does not have any of the filled in text. :(

Ah, so the story was new and needed to be approved before you could start writing new pages?

Looks like you are in edit story mode, not edit post mode. Do you have an introduction page you can edit?

I'm sure the head nurse would appreciate a little relief after a hectic first week.

She could either offer Lolo an assistant job for the week as they will need help with the first year magic vaccines, or have Lolo be a test subject for a new anti-charm innoculant which has unknown potency and longevity.

Sorry to learn about how you grandmother is treating you. It's hard when it's family you care about. Older folk have a harder time adapting to change too but hopefully she will come to accept your new way of life. Nothing inspires a writer more than a captive audience. In my mind anyways. With...

But then how will I know which threads are current and which ones are dead when I start reading a new story?