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Try writing a different piece. Maybe you're more in the mood for a sex scene than a prompt.

Uh, first Cumtact?

Won't work. I mean, the lover is still a sapiens. I apply what I have read about transformations+underage sex here on the forums.

Should be alright as long as you don't describe it. The same goes for making reference to underage sex if I recall correctly. Though feels like you're watching in that exact moment it happens, which may be tricky.

Seems like a bit too much. Maybe he can watch, or get a blowjob.

I can see this totally working out in real life. I'm going to stash this, uhm, somewhere...

You could do something like a power that reduces willpower/strength under some specific circumstances. But first some clarifications: -why do women dominate on this island? Are they power users? Simply very strong? Is it a cultural thing? Are their men particularly meek? -do you plan to...

Let's go with this: I'd keep the power set and the sexism separated. Sexism is already your motivation, the power set is the tool to make it happen.

I understand. Better: I agree. Though amplifying hatred doesn't sound very sexy.

Well, yeah, they were just for reference. The Kibi Kibi no Mi is pretty straightforward to duplicate and adapt to the situation. Imagine producing something from your body that, if eaten, makes the person in question fall under your control. I believe there is a whole story about this...

too vague for the One Piece standards

Uh, pretty sure we don't need that.

Well, the obvious would be something like this. Good ol' mind control, which apparently scores of people like here on chyoa. This one will literally spoil your whole idea, instead.

Dude, leave the olive oil out of this, capisc?

Well, for starters you could ask yourself why did you choose this setting: Did you have an image, a situation that made you think it would be a good idea to go with this pocket monster's stuff? Did you plan to write the story with a specific kink in mind? Other than, you know... that one which...

So... you mean there are shows out there that are not?

Original ideas are a chimera.

Sure! Hey, I'm working on his idea. Not many days ago I specifically stated that BDSM turns me off. I just happened to read he doing reseach about that stuff and guessed he wanted to use it in this story. Not, not exactly. Rival would be a word too strong. It's just life, everyday common...

I guessed as much, it still sounded weird.

Just some sparse thoughts: -Why are they taking these photos of her? How did they meet? What brought two people so different together? Some kind of school project? - Feels really out of a manga. She can't be a beautiful girly girl cheerleader, full of money, (so I assume very popular too...)...