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  1. DeviantChalice

    POV Dilemma

    I tend to prefer third person so I can occasionally lean a little into omniscient narration where appropriate. In 1st and 2nd person it's a lot more jarring to state things that the POV character isn't explicitly aware of.
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    Got like 10 half-baked chapters and I keep bouncing between them, never finishing a single one

    Got like 10 half-baked chapters and I keep bouncing between them, never finishing a single one
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    A Party Gone Wrong

    Is there anything noticeably lacking from this story that people think might be good? (besides good writing talent. Can't fake that one)
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    How do you deal with burnout/no motivation?

    That said, anti-depressants are sometimes a good idea
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    How do you deal with burnout/no motivation?

    Perhaps I'm not the best example since I've not published in over a week, but the reason I could commit so much to my story is it's full of choices. The choices led the main character down a bunch of different paths with different characters, and even seeing different sides of those characters...
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    Am I the worst type of reader out there?

    *looks at my story map* Yeah, that's never happening
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    I had to rewrite a chapter the other day because I forgot that people sometimes keep their house...

    I had to rewrite a chapter the other day because I forgot that people sometimes keep their house keys in their handbag
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    What is your "deleted scene" in your story?

    When writing A Party Gone Wrong I usually plan like two or three chapters in advance, then start writing the first chapter and then it goes somewhere else that makes the following chapter choices no longer make sense, so I delete chapters like... Every time I sit down to write. Notably planned...
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    What would you like to see in a Time Travel plot?

    I don't know how I feel about this
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    What would you like to see in a Time Travel plot?

    "Bill and Ted's Sexcellent Adventure" was right there Or XXXcellent Adventure? Someone's got to have made that parody
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    "11 months ago" never shows up

    I've noticed sometimes that when a page loads the first time it might read as "17 seconds ago" for example and then rapidly switch to reading "a few seconds ago" So that would be the plugin at work, right?
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    "11 months ago" never shows up

    Yeah I suspect that's just due to how the site is set up to round the time difference from the timestamps. By the time it's 11 months you may as well call it a year anyway
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    View chapter/page's bookmarks?

    Performing necromancy on this thread because I concur. If this could be implemented, it would be useful
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    A Party Gone Wrong

    Help I think I just wrote a consensual sex scene in this story. Sometimes (almost always) characters take a life of their own after a little while and I guess there's a version of events where two horny loner teenagers have fun having sex with each other. Edit: This isn't actually a problem. I...
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    Was trying to see how well it dealt with "person living a normal life" and had a prompt...

    Was trying to see how well it dealt with "person living a normal life" and had a prompt involving a man working as a servant in a castle. It surprisingly quickly genderflipped the protag and then had her get sexually assaulted by the stable boy. So you can see why they added safe mode...
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    Because there are situations where the assertive decision saves her and ones where it dooms her...

    Because there are situations where the assertive decision saves her and ones where it dooms her. There are no situations where the submissive choice *saves* her but they can make it less bad for her.
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    Need to go through my story and work out how often the submissive decision is the better choice...

    Need to go through my story and work out how often the submissive decision is the better choice and how often it's the assertive one...
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    AI dungeon is wild. It makes great smut when you're trying to play seriously, makes SFW stories...

    AI dungeon is wild. It makes great smut when you're trying to play seriously, makes SFW stories, when you're trying to do smut, and just forgets details established a few turns ago. Still a ton of fun though.
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    How do I get branches converge back into one?

    Gotta link 'em. Click edit chapter, then the ≡ symbol. Near the bottom will be "link chapter" Click that and your chapter text will be replaced by "This chapter is linked with" and a box. Enter into the box the name of the chapter you want to link it with, select it, and save it. So you'd...
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