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  1. SeriousBrainDamage

    This or That?

    Yeah, I think I get this one. Now should mean that somewere in those 10 minutues or so, she started to feel self-conscious, but the stress is on the fact that now she she does. Once instead should mean that just after the jailor left, she became self-conscious. This probably still lasts to the...
  2. SeriousBrainDamage

    This or That?

    Well, I'm not either, but I feel this is one of those kind of problems that follows you thorugh the translation. I'm pretty sure I've got this once, back when I writed a little more, but now I feel like I have to relearn to ride a bicycle. Ever had this kind of feeling? It sucks. This is an...
  3. SeriousBrainDamage

    This or That?

    Hey guys, my brain feels kind of gripped lately. I was trying to decide what's best to use when writing from a 3d person PoV but I can't seem to focus enough to solve the matters by myself, so here I am. Just for example: Yes, this girl, she was actually gorgeous, more pretty of any of the...
  4. SeriousBrainDamage

    On Tom Holland's Spiderman

    I'm only saying that if you get the hots for a 17 yrs old and try to hook with her/him you are not a pedophile, you're just a criminal by the law. That's not a small difference. Please, I don't want to go over why 17 or 18 or 19 doesn't really change that much, I'm sure you're more than capable...
  5. SeriousBrainDamage

    Stories with streamers\youtubers

    Companies are smart enough to know that the fact their characters are being sexualized out there on the internet is a good sign of their popularity and has more chance to influence positively their revenues than not. That being said, they will never admit that, especially Disney which on the...
  6. SeriousBrainDamage

    On Tom Holland's Spiderman

    There's no need to call on pedophilia when arguing about teenagers imho, pedos are children. So countries where the age of consent is less than 18 are full of pedophiles? He's 16, because he lived only 16 years, his body aged only 16 years. He wasn't suspended, or asleep or in coma, or in...
  7. SeriousBrainDamage

    1001 Quick Story Ideas

    Get a room.
  8. SeriousBrainDamage

    Stories with streamers\youtubers

    Wait, how did we end up talking about banning the use of fictional characters? Besides I think all Disney could ask is to take down the story, as long as you don't make a profit out of it. No big deal, really, and I guess they wouldn't even bother as the resulting clamour could be worse than...
  9. SeriousBrainDamage

    Stories with streamers\youtubers

    I think real names should at least be off-limits. You know the disclamier : This is a work of fiction. Names, characters, places and incidents either are products of the author’s imagination or are used fictitiously. Any resemblance to actual events or locales or persons, living or dead, is...
  10. SeriousBrainDamage

    Stories with streamers\youtubers

    Feels like a sensible concern, especially for the part where shit hits the fan(base) of said streamer, though I don't see very much the difference between the 'proper' celebrities and streamer or whatnot. I do not know this environment almost at all I confess, so my view could be biased here...
  11. SeriousBrainDamage

    How often, if at all, do you read stories that aren’t necessarily for you?

    You don't need me to tell you that you are free to like or not any kind of stories but I must say I find your views a little too narrow. I purposedly avoided replying also to your post because I didn't want you to think I was going against you. But since we are here, here's my two cents...
  12. SeriousBrainDamage

    How often, if at all, do you read stories that aren’t necessarily for you?

    I'm glad you felt like apologizing as I like politeness, but you didn't have to. Mine wasn't a bash, rather a light tap. No one could really feel offended for that ;) No need to make this bigger than it is. On the identities, which are by the way just the last trend on selling ads, while I...
  13. SeriousBrainDamage

    How often, if at all, do you read stories that aren’t necessarily for you?

    Wait, what? First I wanna say, down with the patriarchy, of course, but what's all this about male pov being dominat in the entertainment? If we are strictly speaking of PoV I don't see it to be very common, either male or female. We can argue about a lot of stuff coming trough the eyes of a...
  14. SeriousBrainDamage

    How often, if at all, do you read stories that aren’t necessarily for you?

    As others have said, the stuff I come across can be divided in three groups: a)generes/kinks I actively like b)genere and kinks I don't really care about c)those I actively dislike and avoid as much as possible. I go for a, and occasionally stumble in b or c. Usually I keep on reading b as...
  15. SeriousBrainDamage

    1001 Quick Story Ideas

    I missed that. So, well, the story sure hasn't that fantasy & disney-y vibe I feel it should have. On the other hand Robinson Crusoe it's a book, so that's a parody of an actual existing tale alright. Yet I fear it could look out of place. This is all purposedly failing to address my...
  16. SeriousBrainDamage

    1001 Quick Story Ideas

    OFC there was, it was written in the seventheenth century after all. It was rather colonialist, and Christian. Eww. Surely not the take I would give. I was more thinking of the guy playing (or rather trying) tricks on her mind, telling her some invented story about their relationship like...
  17. SeriousBrainDamage

    1001 Quick Story Ideas

    Yeah right? I don't know either. That's right, the number is 109, my bad.
  18. SeriousBrainDamage

    1001 Quick Story Ideas

    109.Robinson's Cruise Robinson is a forty-something man that that lives a somewhat sad life. He the kind of nerd no one actually cares about: he's rather unfit, has an unstatisfying job, still lives with his parents and has nothing that even remotely resembles a girlfriend... you know, he is...
  19. SeriousBrainDamage

    When Is A Story TOO Big?

    I think 100+ chapter depth is enough to put me off. For I how I see erotic stories I find it really difficult for them to stay fresh for so long. Whatever pussy or cock or ass was there has been more than throughly fucked, sucked or spanked at that point. Also, a wall of tags usually pushes...
  20. SeriousBrainDamage

    Cringiest Lines in Porn/Erotica?

    Yeah well, before getting into the matter, breaking some paragraphs here and there will help with making your post a little more readable. I'd like to agree with you on the 'girl paying with sex' trope being stupid, but fact is reality kind of proves you wrong almost daily about that. Talking...
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