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  1. Lake_Nine

    Story Loop example

    Map all the options you want out. Then split it down into categories of stuff, so for example pants, shirt, shoes whatever. They have a controlling variable for each category. So you have a variable for pants and if it is checked or one or whatever you cannot choose any later options of clothes...
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    "Happy Maid"

    I took a look at your story, I remember reading a bit of it several months ago but holy shit is it deep down. Not only did you write a lot you did a good job of cleaning up dead ends and added a variable system two things I love to see people doing. You have written a incredible amount and...
  3. Lake_Nine

    Story Loop example

    Lets say you want to set up a sex scene with lots of options to give the reader a feeling of agency, now you can make it so the story loops back on itself a bit better. You can also lock out or open up options later in a story based on earlier choices. My go to example of how best to use this is...
  4. Lake_Nine

    Story Loop example

    You are correct, however it comes down to a matter of personal taste in things like this. I like having a counter variable so I just did it that way, more than one way to skin a cat though. That is what it is there for, I will approve anything as long as it is helpful
  5. Lake_Nine

    The new Adopt a Story Program

    Can I grab "How the Other Half Loves", it is fairly small and hasn't been touched in just about a year. However it says it is owned by Noah_Peal right now who is still active so if he is doing something with it forget it. "Gender-Bender Town" Which was updated by you in June but other than that...
  6. Lake_Nine

    Story Loop example

    I didn't see it in the main Chyoa guide so I made a quick example of how to loop a story with options that you can only choose once or where you can only choose a set number of options You can read it here The reason I did this is that it can cut down on the main failing of most stories on...
  7. Lake_Nine

    Feminization Games.

    It has been sitting on my back burner forever to add a conditioned story like that. Basically you would have a dominance or defiance value and a submission value which would dictate what ending you got. Depending on how long you wanted to make it the whole thing could be a lot of work though.
  8. Lake_Nine

    Post suggestions here!

    Can we get hidden values for the condition stuff please? Also can we get a option to turn it on by default when someone reads the story, with the option to turn it off though still.
  9. Lake_Nine

    Post suggestions here!

    Can stories with the condition branches enabled AND USED be marked as such in some way?
  10. Lake_Nine

    Open to suggestions

    If you want to learn how to write a basic choose your own adventure story, I suggest just getting a pen and paper and mapping it out. The one thing I have learned is what is fun to write isn't usually fun to read. Make a plan with all the branches laid out (or most of them). To start just make a...
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    [Suggestion] Story Variables and Conditional Branches

    I heaven't read everything here but it sounds like you want two types of new story a pure T/F bool type story and an array/value based story. Consider this, when a user submits something to a story like this they must fill in the assigned variable field before submitting it. This value could...
  12. Lake_Nine

    CHYOA Marketing

    Consider this, find a really popular story. Cut it down, edit it down, and sell it on amazon as a interactive kindle story. It would be a bitch to get authors permission, often a lot of them but it might be worth it. Take X% off the top for all sales and in exchange for the publishing and...
  13. Lake_Nine

    The Free Dictionary and a Resource on Grammatical Errors

    Just wanted to add grammarly, it is a chrome plug in and although it doesn't currently work with the site it provide a free spell checker that is better than the sites. It asks to you pay for a better one, but it will catch the big shit.
  14. Lake_Nine

    Post suggestions here!

    I have written two messages now and both times I put all the text in the subject line. Normally I would chock this up to me being a dumb ass, butt the subject line is about 90% bigger than the body text box or at least it has a lot of dead space between it and the body text body. Maybe move the...
  15. Lake_Nine

    Post suggestions here!

    This is one of many issues I have run into reviving such and old story. The author names are fucked on that story now too, I have moved so much text around and rewritten almost everything changing some mistakes and some small elements. A last edited by tag might be a good idea. Sorry for the...
  16. Lake_Nine

    The new Adopt a Story Program

    Edited a lot of it and rewrote some stuff, can I get access to the main story page so I can give it a picture change the description and add in some variable character names please?
  17. Lake_Nine

    The new Adopt a Story Program

    Can I get The Suit https://chyoa.com/story/The-Suit.686/map?chapter=8847
  18. Lake_Nine

    Post suggestions here!

    Can we get a global text view for a story, going back and editing anything in detail can be a pain. Also on that note can we have a suggested edits function to other peoples chapters, I feel like it might be there and I am just blind. Happy Saint Patrick day also
  19. Lake_Nine

    X-Change

    Suggestion X-Change is water soluble, you can spike a dink, or suspend it in water and inject it for that surprise butt sex moment
  20. Lake_Nine

    X-Change

    Will add something then
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