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I try to write at least one new chapter a day to keep from getting rusty, but I think the quality could be better. I'm concerned about pacing, and think I may be verbose. I would also love some advice on how to write better sex scenes. Up My Game!

Anyone else have any advice? I really want to improve the quality of my writing.

I recently tried to write my first chapter about tickling. https://chyoa.com/chapter/Tickling%21.508959 It's a bit out of my wheelhouse, so I'd love any advice I can get on how to improve it.

Thanks for responding! Any advice for writing better/more explicit sex scenes?

I've been writing 'Losing It All' for a while now (I try to write at least one new chapter each day to keep from getting rusty), and I figure it could help to get some feedback/advice from other writers. All responses are welcome, but I do have a couple specific issues I've been thinking about...

Any plans to add more chapters for Lilly, Ekibe, and Kimiko? Those three are my favorites.

I'm trying to add a picture to one of my chapters. I've followed the instructions in the guide, but every time I try to post something, I just get a little icon signifying that the picture is broken. Can someone please walk me through it? Sorry to post this. I tried looking up answer using...

I did this accidentally the other day too. Luckily I was able to recover the lost chapter using the Wayback Machine of all things. It's pretty weird to know someone, somewhere has backed up some random chapter of smut I wrote.

I've been thinking of taking some of the old stuff I've written on here (it was part of someone else's story) and redoing it (mostly just switching it from first to third person) as one chunk of a new story of my own. Is that considered to be in poor taste, since it would end up inflating my...

Hooray!

It's a shame to see this falling on the back burner. I was loving the stuff with Ekibe, and the story sections about Lilly's New Clothes and Lilly getting mugged and was hoping to read more about those.