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  1. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    Questions about an idea for my first story...

    It's less of a trap card, and more of a Duel Disk chock full of trap cards, each one already active and holding the screaming soul of a former opponent. Have fun! :D
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    Anybody want to get brutally murdered by the MC in Girl Gamer (Abridged?)

    Unfortunately, I just published the latest chapter. Want me to write you in as a victim in a future chapter? Nobody dies by accident, unless the accident was caused by a player's actions. It's a story about video games first, Switchy NC cat-and-mouse games second, and slapstick comedy as a...
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    Anybody want to get brutally murdered by the MC in Girl Gamer (Abridged?)

    Achievement Unlocked: One day 'till retirement!
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    Questions about an idea for my first story...

    I recommend reading Gambio's generic body control story. It's about a late high school teen girl dominating her little brother. A huge psychological focus revolves around her keeping track of his limits and keeping him relatively safe, even as she makes him feel weak, helpless, and embarrassed...
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    Anybody want to get brutally murdered by the MC in Girl Gamer (Abridged?)

    Got any cheesy 70s one-liners to growl as you pull out your gun and point it at the perp? Or in this case, at the hot female cop suddenly betraying you?
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    Anybody want to get brutally murdered by the MC in Girl Gamer (Abridged?)

    This is all quite doable. Thank you folks! :) There's three open slots on the MC's team. If you go this route, you'd be more of a stealthy, rapelling-from-the-rooftop sort of cop than a kick-in-the-door sort of cop. I can probably abstract those characters away, though. If the slots get filled...
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    Anybody want to get brutally murdered by the MC in Girl Gamer (Abridged?)

    You know what? I'mma give you a speaking role, buddy. :) Hope you feel better, bro.
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    What turns you off in a story?

    What if it's used as a comedic device? Asking for a friend...
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    Anybody want to get brutally murdered by the MC in Girl Gamer (Abridged?)

    I'm working on an "abridged" (read: parody) version of Girl Gamer by parkingdiscount, called Girl Gamer (Abridged.) The main twist is the titular Girl is just as good at video games and just as toxic as the people trying to violate her. Anyway, I'm working on a big PVP fight scene, and I'm...
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    Ever wondered if you're ever a decent writer?

    Ooh! I actually saw a thing about this recently! It's actually good news, it actually means you're improving, it just doesn't feel like improvement because it's happening in phases. Basically, reading and writing are two separate skills. (Perhaps "reading" would be better phrased as...
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    Looking for a writer for game (hire)

    Everything dies if you don't keep feeding it. That's normal. What's unique about CHYOA is if you DO keep feeding it at regular intervals, it's guaranteed to get time on the front page again. You can't say the same about most other social media websites, where the algorithm does whatever the...
  12. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    Talk about a blow to the ego

    I don't understand the question. Is what possible?
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    Talk about a blow to the ego

    One way to find out. Pick a popular story. Click on the Story Map. Scroll down the page, looking at the Likes. Click on the Chapters that have more Likes than the previous chapter, despite having fewer Views than the previous chapter. (Views *always* taper off over time.) Betcha some of 'em...
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    Looking for a writer for game (hire)

    CHYOA is a weird beast, because it's almost build from the ground up to attract and reward amateur writers in various ways. I consider this a feature, not a bug. The way you transform amateur writers into professional writers is by giving them feedback, and eventually, when they earn it, money.
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    Has there ever been a GDC video about CHYOA?

    I highly recommend trying Twine if you like flowcharts, Ink if you like typing, and Ren'Py if you like pretty pictures. I've also heard good things about ChoiceScript, but have not worked with it yet. Don't get up, Wolf. :) Here's that link to Obsidian you mentioned. Is it bad that I've been...
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    Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

    That's fair. If it makes you feel any better, I looked directly at your avatar after reading your post, so we're probably even. All of that mistakes in that post were intentional. (Unless I don't know about them.)
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    from the guy that brought you snakedick girl get ready for horse vagina

    But the "taur" part of Minotaur means "bull." They created this *amazing* fan art of natural selection inaction, and then basically named it "Minotaur, but spelled differently." Surely, if anything, that's a Manándra.
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    Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

    Good idea! The thought had not occurred to me. Thank you for your feedback. After careful consideration, I have decided to take your advice, and write an answer chapter. Don't worry, I'll be sure and give you credit for making the suggestion. It's the least I can do.
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    Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

    Also! Before I forget, I was so excited about my impending roast, I wrote some Theme Song Lyrics for Marcie and Gina read CHYOA. Yes, it's to the tune of that theme song. Why wouldn't it be?
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