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  1. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    Talk about a blow to the ego

    Also, if you can get 1 Like for every 100 "eyeball points," that seems like a pretty solid ratio. So if a chapter has less than 100 views, you literally don't have enough information yet. Maybe the one guy out of 100 who's going to click Like just hasn't seen it yet, because he only visits the...
  2. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    Talk about a blow to the ego

    So, uh... I read through some of your work, like I said I was going to, and... uh... let's say I got inspired. Yeah. I found your work inspiring. Sorry. Not sorry. :P
  3. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    Talk about a blow to the ego

    I don't know if you've actually read that story of mine that Gambio roasted the other day, but do you know what chapters got the most Likes? High points in the story. Satisfying conclusions to narrative arcs. Tender or upbeat moments. Like when the Hopeless Hotties return triumphant from their...
  4. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

    Yes. Exactly like those. Shame on you.
  5. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

    (eagerly rubs hands together and clicks the link, grinning like an idiot) “The guy can't even spell embarrassment right, Marcie!” ...FUCK! “And the title sucks too!” What's wrong with the title? I thought it kinda stood on its own, even if you're not familiar with Log Horizon or Hopeless...
  6. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

    Cute. I see you went straight for the low-hanging fruit. The next time you decide to put words in my mouth, could you maybe try to come up with something original? Also, nice to see the Metal Gear Awesome reference sailed right over your head. Clearly, we could not be less alike. (Just kidding...
  7. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    from the guy that brought you snakedick girl get ready for horse vagina

    You misspelled "horsesome." Also, it's not a checkmate, because the centaurtaur moves like two consecutive knights.
  8. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    from the guy that brought you snakedick girl get ready for horse vagina

    Explain to me why a loving threesome between a snakedick girl, a horse woman, and a centaurtaur can't be wholesome.
  9. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    from the guy that brought you snakedick girl get ready for horse vagina

    I choose instead to encourage all your worst tendencies here. Do it up! And when you're finished, consider adding a bonus chapter featuring a frisky Centaurtaur! (As you know, that's the mythical creature with the body of a horse, and the head of a body of a horse.)
  10. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    Talk about a blow to the ego

    I think maybe some people Favorite instead of Bookmark? I'm not sure why, though.
  11. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    Talk about a blow to the ego

    Are you kidding me!? That's crazy. Your writing advice is so good. I'm gonna block out an evening and read as much of your back catalogue as I can, because I know you can write. The verbal backflips you were pulling off in this thread alone... -_- It must be something else you're doing wrong...
  12. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    Talk about a blow to the ego

    Well, by the time I saw this, they'd already deleted the story, so I can't comment on how to improve as a writer. But here are a few points that I think probably hold up in the general case, though: I'm pretty sure the number next to the eyeball takes into account time spent viewing the page...
  13. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    Looking for a writer for game (hire)

    Hi there! :) I have a couple of questions that I think all of us writers reading this would appreciate hearing the answers to: Is this your first video game? If not, I'm sure we'd all love a link to your back catalogue, so we can see what style of games you like to produce. What demographic...
  14. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    weird stuff you are searching on google for your story

    Stats for various D&D monsters - mostly as a loose guide for relative power-scaling Mythological basis for various D&D monsters. - so I know I'm not accidentally saying a copyrighted word like "Beholder" How much money do television executives make? - Answer: "Did you mean digital media...
  15. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    Has there ever been a GDC video about CHYOA?

    That's the thing about GDC though. Their business model is weird. They put their videos on youtube for free, but they give them names based on the design lessons taught in the talk, rather than the games or IPs referenced in the video. Even if I knew the name of the game or its publisher, the...
  16. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    Has there ever been a GDC video about CHYOA?

    This is driving me crazy because I feel like I watched this video on youtube or some similar site a long time ago and it was about CHYOA. But I can't find it now, so I assume it must have been GDC, since they're notoriously difficult to search for. Does anybody know what video I'm talking...
  17. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    What does "dated" mean in the category "Non-English (dated)?"

    Oh, shoot. That was really obvious, wasn't it?
  18. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    What does "dated" mean in the category "Non-English (dated)?"

    Oh, okay, so there's a different... system, in place now. I get it. You know, that makes me wonder if it might be possible to rig up some kinda automatic system to convert the old stories? Capture the text of the first chapter, dump it into Google Translate using whatever API they offer, (or if...
  19. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    Vertical lines to make it easier to identify branches. (Optional toggle.)

    I like the idea of making them fainter. I still think colored lines would be useful for particularly "wide" stories that end up looking like |||| | | ||| || || ||||| || halfway down the map. I also still think colored lines would detract from the designed aesthetic, though. So I still think...
  20. CurvyLinesEverywhere

    What does "dated" mean in the category "Non-English (dated)?"

    So the category itself is a throwback? And modern non-English stories are expected to go into another category?
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