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Great review, accurately pointing out my shameful inability to proofread worth a damn and also how vanilla my sex scenes are... and unfortunately how non-sexy some may find them. I'll write something that Marcie and Gina find arousing yet, just you wait! ;) But thank you for liking the world...

Oh yeah, if the ladies have time, I'd like to put another story into their endless backlog for their savage but fair criticism whenever time allows. https://chyoa.com/story/The-Steward.36913 It's *close* to being finished, but it's 42 chapters of a mostly linear fantasy story. It's my take on...

Heh, The Affection Multiplier, talking about my branch of it I assume. In my fuckwit bingo card I wrote "kinda?" on rape device because it's a mind control story so there *is* a rape device depending on how you choose to interpret it. Luckily, it seems like Gina let's my interpretation of mind...

:oops: Oh dear (Loool)

I sure hope it's not a huge no-no, because I do it. But, sparingly. As you say, different narrators is one thing, and when I do that I put the name of the character at the front of a chapter when the POV *character* changes in that way. But changing tense and/or *story* point of view is...

I write online stories and if I do it right people stop reading after the best parts.

I’ve written probably 50/50 between male and female POVs. I really enjoy writing from the woman’s point of view (even in third person) for a variety of reasons. I like to think I’m not bad at it, but who’s to say. I’ve also written a couple of chapters from a woman’s point of view in mind...

I have never used game mode and likely never will but huge props to you for explaining all that. I am sure that will help so many writers!

Having written a naughty Christmas story I guess I have to vote yes huh?

Letting non users use site maps isn’t something I have an opinion on, but the content of some anonymous comments on literotica is a hell no from me ;) It’s not even the extra rude “you ruined this story idiot” anonymous comments but the cringey “this reminds of some totally real sex I had in...

Oh jeez, I could never do that but a few times I've been tempted.

Likes are important and I care about them a lot more than I should, but I'm *trying* to get better. I used to pay more attention to them, but thank god when I started writing more niche (or simply much worse?) stories that were obviously not as popular I was able to slowly ease off on noticing...

Coincidentally, on the CHYOA fan discord we had a conversation today about comments and interaction. I mentioned how I’m sometimes a bit embarrassed at how much I personally comment on stories I like, but I know how much I love comments so I try not to worry that I over do it. I also, when I...

I have another story I’d love to submit, but I’m like 12ish chapters from the end so I’m trying to be patient.

Full Name: Ella Gardner Affiliation: chaotic good Race: Caucasian, Canadian Sex and Gender: cisgender female Age: 19 Sexuality: bi-curious sexually, but monoromantic Height: 5'6", 1.63m Bust: generous Waist: trim but not perfectly flat About: first year engineering student at University...

Hi! So sorry, I made a comment on my own chapter not paying attention and it spoils an event in the next chapter! :oops::rolleyes: Could someone please delete my comment from Amaruq's Bed - The Steward — CHYOA? I'm an idiot lol.

Brevity would help my stories a fair bit I think. Not always, but I tend to get lost in the weeds and over explain and/or dump too many little extra ideas into scenarios and character moments. It can be good, but I do worry that I end up diluting what I think of as good character moments by...

I always avoid names of anyone I know in real life beyond a very distant sense, so if I know a "Cindy" I won't use the name unless it's a very casual workplace person I rarely interact with. Especially in the genres I write in, I'd never use a close friend of family members name. ;P What I tend...

Likes are always good, I agree. Even for people like me who only really do one main branch at a time, it's all good. I do wonder if I tried to do a legit branching path if one got more likes then the other if it would impact my ouput. But every story I do even with branches it tends to just be...

I did finally write an explicitly queer couple of chapters and I'm pleased I tried. I'm not sure it was successful (like, how would I know?) but it doesn't seem awful at least. I also wrote a chapter with a character discussing her confused gender identity, which didn't have sex (I had intended...