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Thanks for your input. It is quite a lot, so I’ll have to wait until after work to go over everything. I have considered going back over and editing the first two chapters again. I didn’t polish them as much as I would have liked. The flaw of being your own editor is that stuff will make sense...

https://chyoa.com/story/Ben%E2%80%99s-Mother.63740 Despite the title it’s not incest. Story is about an older woman and her son’s best friend falling in love and all the obstacles between them.

Blessed is the reader who favorites your story and then goes and likes all your chapters.

Yeah the only way seem to be able to find is having a story with that tag in my favorites and pulling it and clicking on the tag in the story.

It’s listed under family not incest I believe.

Tell me if you see any non-cacti plants, rocks, water, or people."

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Woot 1000 likes for Shota Universe!

If only some of these people who are favoriting my story could translate that over in to likes of chapters. /sigh

Making a negative criticism is always tricky as some writers react poorly to even the most well intentioned criticism. I’ve found if you start off with praising something you like About the story it takes the edge off of your complaint. An insult though should in no wise be considered good faith...

I keep my comments to constructive criticism or praise. I don’t feel insults help anyone.

I think it is a combo of not doing nudity and being an early crush for a lot of the users here.

You used to could in many states but it was changed in the early eighties because they did not want High School students to be able to buy beer. The idea was people 21 and older would be outside high school kids friend circles.

The legal drinking age in all US states is 21.

Currently as stories are updated older updates move along the rows left to right before snaking back to the front of the subsequent rows before they fall off completely. I propose instead going up and down the columns before snaking to the top of the subsequent column. The Mobile site Only...

Welcome to all the newbies. Glad to have you on board! ;)

I listen to Classical. Mainly because I can’t write while listening to music with lyrics.

I’m a feedback kind of guy. I always try to reply to comments about a story. Any criticism as long as it’s in good faith is always welcome. And I want to get better as an author. So hearing from both genders is something I welcome. I was more looking for something we as a community could do to...

I just ask b/c I like to get perspectives that are not familiar to me. I feel like those are needed to grow as a writer. I only write on this site. So I don’t really know anyone else who writes erotica. So I was just curious if there was something about the site or the stories here that was off...

Are there any females lurking here that might offer there perspective? I would love to hear their point of view.