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  1. brevdravis

    I think I need a kick in the ass

    The "I can't write" stuff SUCKS. I know how it feels, and it's frustrating as hell, because you look at what you have done, and you know you CAN write... Course, this is the point at which I have both my english professors and my drama professors yelling in my ear "THIS IS MATERIAL...
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    1001 Quick Story Ideas

    77. Bad 80's Exploitation film! Travel back to a world where all the barbariennes are surprisingly big haired, and yet can't keep their clothes on or legs apart around the bad guys! Add a few very interesting Stop Motion/Giant Puppet sequences, and you've got a surpringly large amount of...
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    What makes a story popular?

    I think it's kinda like how John Wayne won an Oscar. Just stick around long enough. (No worries, I'll happily supply the newbie speech, and some old music.) Most people who pick up a new story for the first time are attracted by the tags, or the theme. Just think of how the average person...
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    Is there some real life event that inspire authors to write erotica?

    Ok, I've been writing porn since I got my first word processor. Mostly because I liked reading romance novels, since they seemed to be the only books I could find where the characters actually had an inner life. Occasionally you'd find it in a book for young adults, but I grew up right before...
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    Cringiest Lines in Porn/Erotica?

    I've been told my writing sucks and I should quit for almost thirty years. Still here for some reason. ;P I think those kinda of comments are a bit like Iocane. And I've spent the last several years building up an immunity to negative criticism.
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    When to cut losses?

    Never destroy work. Collages are a thing for a reason. I've lost track of the number of times I've poached an old idea and used the first draft as a model to start from. You can reconfigure a LOT, or save a character, but if you destroy it, it's like it never existed. Google seems to thing...
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    Need a third alien race

    The Blob, the Squid People and The Wookies. (Now that's a progressive punk band name if I've ever heard one) For some reason, I just find the idea of one of the most beloved SF franchise iconic aliens as a horny alien invader surprisingly funny. "Because Slimes don't knot you for hours if...
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    Ever since I put an f14 in my story I can't get "Danger Zone' out of my head. Kinda cool.

    Ever since I put an f14 in my story I can't get "Danger Zone' out of my head. Kinda cool.
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    Cunnilingus

    https://chyoa.com/chapter/Kelly-is-experienced.724594 Almost nobody read this one, but It's a lesbian scene, so... maybe it'll be what you're looking for. Also, Neighbors Next Door has a couple threesome scenes that include woman/woman oral as well. Monster Girls by Silverspectre006 has a...
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    A discussion on CHYOA Rules

    And a quick clarification on the Harkness test. Essentially it was used as a yardstick by the "Doctor Who" writers, and went into various fandoms as a result. (The show "Torchwood" a Doctor Who spinoff, pushed the limits a great deal, including non consensual alien breeding as well...) Short...
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    A discussion on CHYOA Rules

    Essentially, the entire matter is that of the court's opinion. As it is right now, the US Supreme Court applies "Community Standards" which are those of the most backwards Facebook user who wants to make a stink. Totally a matter of a judge's opinion, and I tend to find that if you try to...
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    Sharing a consideration

    Well, if you made it four midgets, you're into Norse Mythology... And I don't know about you, but since Sleipnir is a child of Loki, I would say that automatically counts as a sentient being and thus eliminates the need for the midgets. But if you want the midgets, you can HAVE the midgets...
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    Cringiest Lines in Porn/Erotica?

    Of course now you all have THIS running through my head. Just laughing because it's amazing how many different tastes there are out there. Thanks for all the comments, and made me feel a hell of a lot better to know that there's some folks who actually find my writing style annoying and...
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    Sharing a consideration

    Unfortunately, due to CHYOA Rules, We will need to specify that the White Bull was in fact two guys in a costume. There are very easy ways to work scenes like that in. Gotta love Shapeshifting as far as its flexibility for getting away with stuff. :P
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    Sharing a consideration

    Well, this is how I think of it... If your fantasy is how you'll take over the world, change everything for the better, and you have a step by step plan to do so... You just saved a Bond Movie writer about three hours of Villain design time. If the character insists that everyone bow down and...
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    So... apparantly ASH is now 1/3 the length of the bible if you count everything. That's Cool.

    So... apparantly ASH is now 1/3 the length of the bible if you count everything. That's Cool.
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    A Special Hell (Request and Feedback Thread)(SPOILERS)

    AAAAND it's DONE. At least as far as taking this story seriously. Phew. I just wrote 15 endings and spent way too long thinking out possibilities. Just so folks know what's going on with ASH now. I'm heading back into goofing off territory. The "Chocolate" endings are going to be every...
  18. brevdravis

    If you like it and enjoy writing it... It BELONGS here.

    If you like it and enjoy writing it... It BELONGS here.
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    Do you feel like you make it too obvious which characters are your favorite?

    Amen to trying to keep the girls individuals in a Harem story. I find it's best if you try to have a few onscreen at a time, simply because any similarities will be easier to minimize. Of course, I also learned Character design from old school RPG's so I'm used to having at least six character...
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    Do you feel like you make it too obvious which characters are your favorite?

    I have to admit, I'm very Poly with my love for my characters... ;p That said, just like a parent... we've got our favorite kids. We'll never ADMIT it, especially to the kids, but we do. Trick is knowing your bias and trying to write past it. Any time I see that I've given my absolute...
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