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  1. brevdravis

    The future of CHYOA (or at least the funding)

    Well, there's numerous stories (Stepford Wives immediately springs to mind) wherein the main character blackmails or uses an application to influence those around them. Technically, they are all "Consenting" as the app makes them consent or they are "Forced" to act consenting via contract...
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    The future of CHYOA (or at least the funding)

    Whaaaaat? No non-con? That just... I mean, isn't that like the main draw for 95% + of the audience? Sure is real funny that restrictions keep getting tighter and tighter, and it's always the same group of blue nosed prigs making the call. Oh well, was fun while it lasted, because... yeah...
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    Most Obscure Reference you've ever used...

    Mass Effect 1.0 With a happier ending! And who doesn't love the Syreen. The Original Blue Skinned Space Babes. Tastes Great! Less Tentacles! Although I must admit, my personal favorite race in that game is the Thraddash. Have spent countless games of Super Melee mastering the only...
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    Most Obscure Reference you've ever used...

    Hello, Hello! Awaken from your dweamy state, hunam! Now is the time for realism, not wild fancy. /Spathi Wisdom
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    Just for pun. World worst pickup lines.

    Hey baby, I put the D in Millionaire. (Wait for the obligatory, "There's no D in Millionaire") Yeah, but I put the D in you, and you're gonna be a Millionaire.
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    Remote control vs. The Rules vs. Mind Control App vs ?

    Off the Top of my head: Beer Stein of Cold: Keeps things cold. Anything within the stein can be reduced in temperature to any degree needed. That's it. Word Processor of Typos: Can fix any "Typo" in the world. Long sought after by Priests who want to fix that damn "Celibate/Celebrate"...
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    Remote control vs. The Rules vs. Mind Control App vs ?

    Former player. Played basic set with a White Green, then quit for a ton of years till odyssey, where I came back with my "Squirrel Deck of Doom". (Blue White Green with a tiny bit of black for the Kickers) I got yelled at a lot for not respecting the Meta. Would like the game a lot more... If...
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    Question about transformation, bimbofication and mental changes

    Well, if you're willing to do a bit of reading/research, there are several authors that have covered this topic quite extensively. The first one to come to mind is Jack L. Chalker, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Jack_L._Chalker who extensively covered the concept of soul/body migration and...
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    The Main Character

    Heh... well, there we disagree, respectfully. Course, I'm going with Kayfabe on this. (For those who do not know, Kayfabe is a Pro-wrestling term, meaning that you pretend everything is on the up and up when you're playing a bad guy. Sure you can get redeemed in some other storyline, OR play...
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    The Main Character

    Playing a "Good" villain means everybody wants you dead. EVERYBODY. Doesn't matter what they believe, they can point to you as the source of their problems, No matter what your problems are, they can point to you, and claim that YOU are the fault of it. Really good villains are people like...
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    Remote control vs. The Rules vs. Mind Control App vs ?

    You know that was kinda Larry Niven's concept in "The Magic Goes Away" books from the 70s. Essentially, you had high level magic users, able to do everything on the planet, but unable to do the most basic things for themselves, because everything they did RELIED on magic as its catalyst...
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    Marcie and Gina read CHYOA

    Lotta fun! Reminds me of a celebrity roast, which is always a good time. All we need is foster brooks at this point. :P
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    How we treat the Stories

    Ok, Getting onto the Soapbox, so forgive me a little personal opinion. IMHO, Erotic scenes can convey as much about a character as any other type of scene. Action scene? You get to know how the character reacts to threats, their mentality on attacks, defense, etc. All of which show...
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    How we treat the Stories

    What we write reflects what we like. ;P I like build up, long dialogs, weird puzzles that aren't really puzzles, and sex. And Who doesn't love Smut? For me, I think how I treat my stories reflects how I feel about my characters. I don't ever want to "Kill My Darlings" as the modern...
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    A Special Hell (Request and Feedback Thread)(SPOILERS)

    Been a long journey, but after a month, no requests and dwindling likes, I'm happy to say that ASH is done. Was a long happy story, but I don't believe I'll be doing any further updates, unless specifically requested. Stay tuned for my next story, "Spice of the Dragon". Less on the feels...
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    Rejected Opening Lines

    "I can arrange that! He could use a good KISS!" Leia thought about it as she watched the asshole walk away.
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    Bulwer-Lytton Quality Erotica Openers.

    There was something alluring about the way she magically wiped the encrusted grime from a dish and seductively squeezed the brownish liquid into the bright and shining metal of the sink.
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    What is your "deleted scene" in your story?

    Well, in ASH, there was the deleted scene where I deliberately set it up for incest in the mother/son direction. Then I realized I really DIDN'T want to write a scene putting the main character under his parents authority, to make it work properly. Still could work the original scene it, but...
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    Thoughts on the Cuckold fetish?

    There's also the possibility that the "Victim" walks into it with eyes wide open and is only pretending not to see it. I can EASILY think of multiple gender swapped variants on this. Actually really makes sense from a psychological point of view based off unspoken power dynamics. The sub who...
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    A Special Hell (Request and Feedback Thread)(SPOILERS)

    Thanks for the feedback! Yeah, a couple of the supernaturals were just ridiculously silly, but I plead insanity. At least I hope left field was entertaining. Glad you enjoyed the other endings and I had at least one that was to your taste. :) IMHO, the story's pretty much done, and I'm...
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