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I go with option 3 all the time, that just how it rolls :) I flit around 4 or 5 stories at a time though - might be frustrating for the readers at times but it's the best I get out of myself

Happy New year!

Hi Ben, First of all, apologies for the late reply but thank you very much for the detailed response. I wasn't sure how the forth wall breaking would be taken but can understand exactly what you mean. It was initially to add another flavour and to give it a try (Entirely different to...

Story : https://chyoa.com/story/Starlight-Shimmer.19308 Hello all, Whoring it out again for some feedback, what do people think of the pace so far? I'm enjoying telling the story and there is a bit more to come, especially from the political mess that will escalate but what about breaking the...

New story and lots of juices flowing now :)

Two and half's years work gone!!!

I agree and understand, as I say those chapters have been deliberately vague about the characters, but I hope I've put enough of a description in the following chapters, their dress sense for one thing trying to paint a picture

Yes those stories shouldn't exist on the site

Pictures or no pictures? Hello all, I didn’t want to spend to long on outlining character traits in the branch, link below; so I’ve deliberately tried to leave it open to interpretation but I’m wondering how it reads and if it does need images? Even just a chapter thrown on to show what they...

I think dare ring could be a lot of fun :)

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Off for a while on holiday, speak to you all soon

I would like to have a look and see if it's something I could perhaps add value to?

Story of the week! I'm honoured and thank you

:) got it all written out on how they meet and affect one another with the multiple choices thrown in (Three alternative endings so far) that'll completely alter the original storyline - the shaping of how they all meet and cause a butterfly effect on each other is really fun to write up at the...

Thanks Zeebop and yeah I thought the episode approach would allow it to flow better with the jumping to different points. I do plan for it to be multiple choice, I just need to get the character introductions sorted with their brief interactions. Moving forwards (Probably episode 2) the...

Hello all, Well I’m back again and back to writing a new story, because I obviously can’t have enough balls in the air. But if I didn’t at the very least get a start on this – it would never happen and just fester. So I’ve posted it with the intention of keeping it going but I guess I’ll see...

Because I obviously don’t have enough balls in the air. I have started a new story which will probably be ready by Friday to initially post