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    The 'my story doesn't fit a category' headache

    Is there a 'nerdy guy with milf, also teen girl, and affair with married neighbour, some group sex, lots of lesbians and a tiny bit of bdsm' category? No? Why the heck not? I'm writing my first ever branching story, which covers a bunch of categories and I'm having a devil of a time trying...
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    Chapter Length - How long is to long?

    I'm sure this has been covered before, but anyway... I know opinions vary depending on the type of story you're writing. Large, sprawling multi branch stories will have smaller chapters. Linear stories longer. I write linear stories, vaguely plot driven (that's what I tell myself anyway)...
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    NSFW AI image editor

    I'm playing around with AI image generation and having some success, but it is with a SFW site. I've tried the NSFW sites but the consistency and quality is just not there (at least the ones I've tried.) Can anyone recommend a NSFW site where I can upload the AI images I have and make then more...
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    Pictures in Stories- Yes or No?

    I was curious what the overall opinion on this is. Let's presume the pictures are good quality and not overly used, and the story is of good quality too.
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    Grammarly Issues?

    For those who use Grammarly, have you been having any issues with it lately? I've used the free version of Grammarly for ages, and it works well for me. But lately I've been having issues with it, two in particular: 1. It keeps 'forgetting' I've already edited the doc and made the changes...
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    Let it marinade for a while

    You've written a great a chapter, it took blood, sweat and tears to produce this master piece and now your finger is hovering over the publish button. But don't push it! Well, not yet anyway, let it marinade for a while. The first time I ever did this it was agony, I just wanted to publish it...
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    Things that almost never happen in CHYOA stories

    People don’t seem to use the toilet. The women of our stories don’t have periods. Safe sex does not exist, but nobody ever gets an STD. There is a distinct lack of pets, are we not animal lovers? What else do we hardly ever see in our stories? By the way, the above applies to all my...
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    Which dead story would you most like to see come back to life?

    I'm not talking zombies here, I mean stories that are unfinished leaving readers clambering for more. Mine is My Daughter's New Boyfriend by Wilparu.
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    AI Pics

    Does anyone know of a good AI site for producing pics? I know there are some good ones out there, and I've played around with a few and had mixed results. What I am looking for is a site that will produce pics of a certain person in a certain outfit/pose. It doesn't have to be porn though...
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    Show, don't tell

    I think this is the mistake I see most often on CHYOA and it's the one that makes me instantly click onto another story. So what is show, don't tell? I've taken the excerpt below from the website, Reedsy. (I can highly recommend Reedsy, it's a wealth of writing knowledge and tips). In his...
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    Give the 1st draft time to rest

    I think this is the best advice I've ever had, it works so well for me. When I write a chapter for CHYOA (or anything else to be fair) once it's done I'll give it one read through and edit then leave it for at least 2 days, but longer is better. Once you've left the draft to rest and go back...
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    POV and Protagonist Gender

    I'm developing an idea for a new story and I'm at the bit where I try to figure out what POV I'm going to use. I don't like writing in 2nd, so that leaves 1st and 3rd. I'm also working on the protagonist's character and right now have the option for them to be either male or female. I'm...
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    Is it worth writing an incest story any more?

    My preferred category for writing stories was always incest (Family). Then the category was taken down from the main page and the likes and comments on my stories dropped off a cliff. So I penned another story in the Erotic Couplings genre which has done fairly well. I'm now working on ideas...
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    An editing rod for my back

    When I first started writing my latest story, Project Harem, I named my main character Jessica. In dialogue with other characters, it seemed natural that they would call her Jess for short. But for reasons that now escape me, in the narrative I continued calling her by her full name, Jessica...
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    Weird notifications?

    Has anyone else been getting notifications from accounts that are subsequently deleted? When I check my notifications, I've got favourites and follows from someone who appears to have then deleted their account. If it was a one off, I'd think fair enough, they've decided not to hang around...
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    Things that surprised me about CHYOA...

    ...and still do. This was the first site I started publishing my stories on, I've tried others but they are just crap (Literotica makes me want to scream). There are things that even now still surprise me. These are not negative, just stuff that gave me a think 'huh, I didn't expect that'...
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    OH NO...my pics disappeared!

    The vast majority of all my pics on imgur have disappeared. They were there a few days ago and have now gone. Weirdly, it's not all the porn ones, about 30 or so porn pics are still there. I'm wondering to pics on imgur have a shelf life? The ones that are still there are fairly new. I never...
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    Tech info for a character

    Hi All...I need a bit of help and thought the good folks here might be able to fill a knowledge gap or three for me. I'm writing a character who is a 20 year old guy, a Brit from London. I'm writing him as a working in a supermarket but he has some reasonably high level tech skills. This is...
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    Disappointed

    I write incest stories and since the category has been taken off the front page the views have dropped dramatically. I know it's not the fault of the site, they've had to make the changes because of pressure from (insert name of narrow minded fools here) and they are doing everything they can...
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    pointing out typos

    A friend kindly pointed out a bunch of typos I'd missed in one of my stories. She said she felt bad for pointing them out. I let her know I was very grateful for letting me know, I appreciate it when people point them out. How do you feel when people point out typos, does it bother you? I'm...
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