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Might have to come up with a bigger plot to tie all the stories around it, even if I was trying to avoid this. In At the Cabin, even without the bear costumes/thieves plot, we still had the trip by itself and the whole "live with each other in tight quarters" to make the story go forward, but in...

You can post it in the Proving Grounds that majus created, to see how much interest you can get before deciding to post it on its own. It's a good story, it'd be nice to see it back.

Zack and Gavin will eventually manage to repair their friendship, since the thing with Victoria will be Heather's idea, and the first sign to Gavin that she's been heading down a dangerous path. One more minor change I think it can be interesting is to have Zack, Chloe and Gavin befriending each...

I'm not sure, I think the club idea might hinder the story's progression, I can very well hit a wall somewhere and get forced to restart, something I don't want to do again. About how the story would start without the club aspect, I was thinking about Zack dating Lisa and Gavin dating a random...

Was running a few simulations of the story in my mind, I'm starting to see the merit in Gavin being the one helping Heather with the club, or whatever shape that idea takes, kind of like getting swept away in all the sex at first, and then trying to get Heather to shut it down once it gets out...

I'd say there's a good possibility of that happening.

Of course, it's pretty much a given that Gavin will bang big sis Hannah at some point, so maybe to not repeat plots too much, I'll shift the mom/son idea to Zack and his mother.

Don't have much planned out for them yet, just figured it could be interesting to involve them. If Gavin gets involved with Heather, it can be something near the end of the story, kind of like 'Heather is at his place and comments that his mom is still young and attractive, that gets Gavin...

Forgot to mention an idea that occurred to me a while ago. This time I might involve some of the parents in the action too, maybe Zack, Gavin and Vicky's mothers and Heather's father, just to mention a few.

Of course, there's also the possibility of keeping roughly the same plot I was already doing, only without the underground club and including the changes I was mentioning.

I came up with the half-brother variation exactly so Gavin didn't become a player, since I think he would have turned up exactly like that if living with Hannah full-time. His mom keeps him humble, I guess. I'm liking the idea of Gavin having had a girlfriend before, who got scared because of...

Okay, I have no way of guaranteeing what will be my state of mind when I return from my writing break, but I thought I can use the time to plan a possible story here in the Chronicles. Wanted to bounce some ideas here and see what sticks. Alright, I mentioned some time ago the idea of having a...

Just the plot suggestions. I was amazed that a single post in the last day of the week put this as Story of the Week. Granted, they exclude from the race stories that recently got the award, but still, it surprised me. It would be good time to post a few chapters on it, but unfortunately, I got...

Holy fuck, with just a single post today after more than three months, Azure Rocks Chronicles got Story of the Week for the first time, that's amazing! Wish this story had taken off better, it gives way more freedom than At the Cabin.

Saw this topic on the front page and decided to ask something. I wanted to know if it would be possible to make a small change to my username, from duskford to Duskford with a capital 'D'. I created my account back in the old CHYOO when I just wanted it to read stories and access the story maps...

That might work. To be honest, I'd rather play a powerless rookie hero, who uses technology, gadgets and his wits to go by, similar to how Batman, Green Arrow or even Iron-Man operate. He sees how the crime is affecting people's lives negatively and decides to do something about it.

Funatic has a good suggestion, if it can't be only DC, you can create a world where the DC and the Marvel characters co-exist and there's original characters as well. With only original characters I wouldn't have too much of an interest to play. A suggestion, maybe we can play original...

I'd be interested in participating in a DC-themed one.

Figured I should explain my intent behind the sudden return of Heather to the fold regarding Zack's affections on my main storyline. Basically, the story will end on the next day of the trip, when they complete a week at the cabin. There'll be a big, long sex scene soon on the the current night...

Hope everyone liked the characters introduced on this thread: https://chyoa.com/chapter/Life-goes-on-at-Azure-Rocks.288785 They're probably gonna be the stars of a new story I may or may not write once I finish my current Zack/Vicky story, as a sequel.