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I think your stories are great by the way.

That's true and thanks Nemo unfortunately the way my mind works every time I get close to a woman that history pops back up and long story short usually screw things up from lack of trusting someone else. Been working on it for years made a huge step earlier in the year but with this story I am...

I should of said this from the start but except for the demons and powers etc this really happened to me and I never got the revenge I wanted I didn't see the people in general again cause my mom sent me away after 6 months of rehab getting my legs to work again. I could of gone the fiction way...

that's what I thought as well. I just hope my writing skills are up to it so I don't blow it.

I usually just write any kind of action that takes place in my story until it is finished or is set up to lead into the next chapter without giving too much away or I try to at least.

Do you have any ideas that I may have overlooked or feedback?

Working on High School Hell looking for feedback.

I have also thought up that his shadow can manipulate things around him but I don't want my character to be a all powerful shadow manipulator somethings he will need to take his Shadow man form to do certain things and that leaves him open to discovery and even manipulation besides Marcuse and...

Ohh okay that makes sense sorry my bad

I was also thinking that he could solidify a shadow he would become a living ghost giving his body to give another shadow controlled by him now form. A shadow doppelganger basically. While in this form he can touch,taste,feel and control everything the doppelganger does and says. While in this...

He could literally pop his head out of a wall and have a chat with someone or go down on a woman, tease her clit,feel her up and while obviously they can feel it but since no one is close enough to touch them they think it's all in there head but eventually and usually when they are alone he can...

A friend also brought that up. I was thinking as long as a shadow covers it he can touch it. For example he could finger fuck a character while being on the other side of the building. I was thinking of letting his power grow every time he gave Lilith a child, if he wants more power he has to...

On my Story "High School Hell" I'm thinking on what powers the main character is going to obtain. Right now the one my imagination seems to be set on is a and the best I can all it is Shadow Man. His entire being is dark except for his face and it appears to others that his body is being blown...

Hopefully that didn't come out sounding like a complaint. I still like the story and looking forward to see where it goes.

I like your Doomsday type alien story the one thing that seems a bit off to me anyway "IF" this alien is supposed to basically be a breeding doomsday how come he's getting killed by rockets and helicopter fire? This is the creature that "killed" Superman and he's killed by bullets and rockets...

Been off of Forum a long time, back now hope everything is going great for everyone else. Me not so much but hey I'm still living so n.a.b

Thanks for your input 2p1k3 I appreciate it

Me too

I'm open for almost any woman just as long as she has a good heart and personality cause I dated a cold hearted,hot bodied bitch once when things didn't go her way she went to her other guys who I didn't know about before and a long story short they fucked me up enough so I couldn't walk for...

I'm writing a first person cause although at times it seems like a second maybe I need to do another rewrite of High School Hell but I want the readers to understand where the main character is coming from with his anger and need for revenge against those who wronged him and left him for dead.