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I do. Well, I think of one anyway!

How about something like this?

Something like this?

Without notifications comments seem almost worthless, as unless the author goes back specifically searching for them they'll never see them.

That sounds like the best result all round.

Lol, that's awesome. Who won?

Sure. You seem to be able to write fairly well anyway and the story seems interesting, so I'd be happy to help. I have noticed a few typo's and a change in tense that doesn't really make sense etc... and one spot where I assume you named your wife manually instead of using the customised name...

Oh yeah, that'd be pretty annoying I guess. I've not had that experience yet, though only having started one story, and private at that, it's not surprising.

I'd love to. Just need my wife to be okay with that...

Somewhat amusingly I do think women look hot with a bit of cum on their faces.

I agree. Being overly specific seems like a bad idea almost all the time.

I totally agree, it's the ideal solution. An easy way of allowing the story to be enjoyable for both the author, and a range of readers.

Mmm I do like pies. I know what you mean about the lack of stories in most porn. I quite like at a minimum at least an explanation as to how the circumstances came about. I've just been watching some old vintage stuff, and while the stories are often pretty bad I do find it more interesting...

Weird... I wasn't aware there was such a thing so didn't consider this as a reason for the prevalence of facials. I'd kind of assumed it was to avoid cumming inside as you said. Personally, that's what I like to see, but it's not all that common. Oooh, I made the list of notable members. :-)...

I don't think basic thread linking will help Robyna. It does sound like they're after conditional stories like you linked. Hopefully this is a feature in Chyoa 2.

Interesting. I was just watching some vids and I guess I wasn't really thinking of a facial post blowjob. A lot of porn does seem to follow a strict flow. Start with oral, go to penetration, then pull out and jack off on the girls face. In one of the vids the guys had to jack off for quite a...

Given how nice a job you did on Chyoa in the first place Friedman, I'm sure Chyoa 2 will be awesome.

Stretched was defined as pulling the glans until it was uncomfortable, so I doubt there would be a 30% margin there.

I've just been wondering what the obsession with facials in porn is. Personally, I kind of dislike the facial. In porn it's almost always degrading, and it just doesn't really do it for me in real life either. When I'm about to cum the last thing I want to do is pull out. I'm kind of curious...

I love that video Porneia, thanks. I would have suggested http://www.synonym.com but unfortunately in the case of moan and groan it's not overly helpful. Good article there Yarkoz, thanks. An interesting quote in there: "The scientific study of the interaction of human genitals during coitus...